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I miss my grandmother When I was fifteen, my grandmother passed away. This moment was very difficult for me, because I had never experienced something so. When she was alive, each friday I went to my grandparent's and I helped to clean their house, after, my grandmother and I talked for hours, and at weekends whole family were going to walk on the beach. Yet, when I go to a old house, the smell do I remind those times. After this, my grandfather lived with me and my parents for seven years, Now-a-days, I haven't grandparents I miss you very much!!

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I miss my grandmother

When I was fifteen, my grandmother passed away. This moment was very difficult for me, because I had never experienced something so sad before.
When she was alive, I went to my grandparent's every Friday and I helped to clean their house, after, my grandmother and I would talk for hours, and on weekends my whole family would go walking on the beach.
Yet now, when I go to the old house, the smell reminds me of those times.

After my grandmother's death, my grandfather lived with me and my parents for seven years,

Now-a-days, I don't have any grandparents.
I miss you very much!!

 

Tu ingles es muy bien, pero hay cositas que hablantes de ingles probablamente hacen incorrectamente tambien. Es una historia muy bonita y triste.

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I miss my grandmother

When I was fifteen, my grandmother passed away. That moment was very difficult for me, because I had never experienced death, like this, before.

 
When she was alive, each friday I went to my grandparent's and I helped to clean their house, after, my grandmother and I would talk for hours, just the two fo us. At weekends the whole family would go for walks on  the beach, it was bliss. 

 

Yet nowdays, whenever I go inside an older house, its smell reminds me of her, and those happy days we spent talking. 

 

Aftre my grandmother passed, my grandfather lived with me and my parents for seven years. Yet, he has also passed on. Now-a-days, I haven't  got grandparents anymore, but I still remember their smell, the touch, their smiles. 

I miss you very much, xxxxx! be at peace. 

 

Ok I added on here. but it was a beautiful story!

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