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My day i want to talk about how i spent the day. i woke up at 6 am then i washed some dresses, after that, took a bath and i went to the library in my university. i didn't really dind what i expected, but i took the few information that was available. i spent 3 hours in the library then i went to class. we were supposed to have a course of computational linguistics at 12. we wait for the teacher during one hour. while waiting, my friends and i took pictures to spend time. at 1 pm, one of our classmate told us that the teacher were not going to come. I then decided to go back home. on my way, i remember that i had nothing to eat at home, then i bought some fruits to cook. When i get home, i cook a plate that i am eating now.

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My day

i want to talk about how i spent the day. i woke up at 6 am then i washed some dresses, after that, took a bath and i went to the library in my university. i didn't really find what i expected, but i took the few little information that was available. i spent 3 hours in the library then i went to class. we were supposed to have a course of computational linguistics at 12. we waited for the teacher for during one an hour. Whilst waiting, my friends and i took pictures to spend pass the time. at 1 pm, one of our classmates told us that the teacher was not going to come. I then decided to go back home. on my way, i remembered that i had nothing to eat at home, so i bought some fruits to cook. When i got home, i cooked a plate that i am eating now.

 

At the beginning of sentences and when using the pronoun I the first letter must be capitalised. You also have more commas than you need. But very good sentences.

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