Life in Seville

I love living in Seville. I'm from a town which (that/which) is fifty km to Seville. I only go home at on the weekends. (weekend/weekendS)
Since I live in Seville, I have met a lot of great people and have made so many much good friends. Here you can't get bored.
At In the mornings you can run running by the river, shopping in the city centre... And at in the afternoons I enjoy drinking beers with my friends in the Alameda or playing basketball. I love Seville.

Corregí tu entrada (aunque tres personas ya te habían ayudado) porque algunas de los "errores" que cometiste realmente no son errores y son perfectamente permisibles en el habla informal. Además, la entrada retiene más del "sabor" original que le habías echado. jaja. Si necesitas ayuda en otra entrada sólo avísame y le puedo echar un vistazao. :)

     I love living in Seville. I'm I am from a town which is located fifty km kilometers to from Seville, so I only go home at on the weekend. Since I live I moved to in Seville, I have met a lot of great people and made so much many good friends. Here you I have never can't get been bored here. At the mornings you Every morning one may find me can running by the river or shopping in the city centre.  And at During the afternoon I enjoy drinking beers with my friends in the Alameda or playing basketball. I love Seville.

I changed the tense to 1st-person. What is "the Alameda?" Goos story, keep writing about your experiences in Seville!
     - Dan 

Life in Seville

I love living in Seville. I'm from a town which is fifty km to from Seville. I only go home at the on weekends.
Since I've been liveing in Seville, I have met a lot of great people and made so much many good friends. You Here you (just) can't get bored here.
At In the mornings you can go running by the river, and/or go shopping in the city centre... And at In the afternoons I enjoy drinking beers with my friends in the Alameda or playing basketball. I love Seville.

 In the morning, you can run along the river, shopping in the city centre... And in the afternoon, I enjoy drinking beers with my friends in the Alameda or playing basketball. I love Seville.