An afternoon thought about gifts and boys. There is a thought/idea missing in between Afternoon and about.  Saying "Afternoon about gifts and boys" es como decir en espanol, "Tarde de regalos y ninos."  Es mas completa y facil para entender en Ingles cuando esta escrito como, "Una tarde lleno con regalos..." (english translation = An afternoon filled with gifts and boys) si tu tarde estaba disfrutaba con lo que se menciono.  O si quiere decir que una tarde estabas pensando en regalos y hombres, decirlo o escribirlo asi, "An afternoon thought about gifts and boys."  (Spanish Translation = Un pensiamento en la tarde de regalos y hombres).  Es correcto a decir "Una tarde pensiamento de regalos..." porque tarde significa una especifica tiempo (No se si se puede decir lo asi en Espanol tambien, porque mi espanol no es la mejor), pero tarde es un saludo en Ingles tambien, asi tienes que poner "Una" en frente de "tarde" para diferenciarlo. (En Ingles, por supuesto)

I become ashamed when someone is too generous with me. (Si te da verguenza, es mejor a decir "ashamed" porque "embarrased" significa que estas preocupado de lo que todo el mundo piensa de ti cuando el mencionado esta pasando.) Recently, I dated a guy who was always given/giving me things.("given" es quendo alguien regala algo, o varias cosas, a una persona antes, solo una ves.) *Recently, I dated a guy who had given me things.  Pero cuando quiere decir que la persona estaba regalando cosas a usted todo el tiempo, no solo una ves, tiene que uses "giving".  Puede decirlo asi tambien, "Recently, I dated a guy who always gave me things."  Once,* I accepted his invitation to an inauguration of a "bistro-bar"/bistro bar Solo uses " cuando estas llamando una cosa lo que fue nombrado, pero que no parece asi. (english translation = Use " when you're calling something that which it was named, but doesn't appear or live up to what it was named and he bought me an expensive necklace and he treated me to dinner ... the generous guy also asks me what do I like for my birthday. *"Once" (sin la ,) en este contexto, se entiende como que algo paso tan pronto de un otra cosa pasando.  Es como  decir "Cuando yo aceptado su invitacion...".  En Ingles, si alguien lee eso, van a pensar que algo mas va a suceder.  Pero cuando pones la "," despues, se convierte a, "Una ves, yo acepte su invitacion..."

The problem is, I'm feeling a bit uncomfortable because I don't have enough money to treat him in the same way. I would prefer someone I have more in common with. In fact, my ideal guy is someone who is sensible and saves his money!

Just a quick story...

An afternoon about boys and gifts. 

It really embarrases me when someone is too generous with me. Recently, I dated a guy who always was giving me things. Once, I accepted his invitation to a grand opening of a "bistro-bar," and he bought me an expensive necklace and he treated me to dinner.  The generous guy also asks me, "What would I like for my birthday?"
The problem is, I'm feeling a bit uncomfortable; because, don't have enough money to treat him in the same way. I would prefer someone with whom I have more in common.  In fact, my ideal guy is someone who is sensible and saves his money....

... Just a story.