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Yesterday and about friends After the Domitory parents meeting, my 3 classmates and I went to XIAOTANGCHAO to have minight snacks. Although,I trying to lose weight,I would like to chat with them,and we had seldom talk to each other. Maybe it was a good time to know them more.We went to the playground after ate flavourful dessert. As we circled around the playground, we talked a lot about ourselves , the people we had met ,our emotional life... I like sharing my stories with someone who interest in them,and I also like listening to people talk about their experiences. It was my first time to talk a long time with people who in my class.so I have a wonderful night because of it. Actually,I think it hard to find someone who can really become your best friend in college.Although,I get along with my roommates,we can't share our feeling and become bosom friend .It's different from high school and college.In high school, I have many friends,we can talk anything around our life...and when I felt depressed,they would made me feel better... Anyway,I still a optimstic person:) and I believe that I will meet a friendly,outgoing,funny friend someday!

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Yesterday and about friends

After the Domitory parents meeting, my 3 classmates and I went to XIAOTANGCHAO to have midnight snacks.
Although, I am trying to lose weight, I would like to chat with them, and we had seldomly talked to each other.
Maybe it was a good time to get to know them more. We went to the playground after we ate flavourful dessert.
As we circled around the playground, we talked a lot about ourselves, the people we had met, and our emotional life lives...
I like sharing my stories with someone who has interest in them, and I also like listening to people talk about their experiences.
It was my first time, in a long time, talking to talk a long time with people who in my class. so I have had a wonderful night because of it.
Actually, I think it is hard to find someone who can really become your best friend in college. Although, I get along with my roommates,we can't share our feelings and become bosom best friends. (I think that's what you meant.) It's different from high school and college.In high school, I have had many friends, we can could talk about anything around in our life lives...and when I felt depressed, they would made me feel better...
Anyway, I am still a an optimistic person:) and I believe that I will meet a friendly, outgoing, funny friend someday!

 

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Yesterday and about friends

After the Domitory parents meeting, my 3 classmates and I went to XIAOTANGCHAO to have minight snacks.
Although,I trying to lose weight,I would like to chat with them,and we had seldom talk to each other.
Maybe it was a good time to know them more.We went to the playground after ate flavourful dessert.
As we circled around the playground, we talked a lot about ourselves , the people we had met ,our emotional life...
I like sharing my stories with someone who interest in them,and I also like listening to people talk about their experiences.
It was my first time to talk a long time with people who in my class.so I have a wonderful night because of it.
Actually,I think it hard to find someone who can really become your best friend in college.Although,I get along with my roommates,we can't share our feeling and become bosom friend .It's different from high school and to college.In high school, I have many friends,we can talk anything around our life...and when I felt depressed,they would made me feel better...
Anyway,I still a optimstic person:) and I believe that I will meet a friendly,outgoing,funny friend someday!

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