A dream too far from Brazil. ( Correct-me, please)
A dream too far from Brazil. (Correct me, please!)
I do not believe in supernatural things. As ghosts, spirits, saints, hell or paradise. This is not real to me.
However, I believe the need that humans have to seek its transcendence. I also look for this transcendence. Not through religion.
So, for me to see the Northern Lights in Canada, I believe that will be my transcendence.
"There is too cold. Freezing There is a place! However, people say that the lights of the Aurora Borealis warms our souls."
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A dream too far from Brazil.
I don't believe in supernatural things, such as ghosts, spirits, saints, hell or paradise. They are not real to me. However, I believe in the need for humans to seek their transcendence. I also look for this transcendence, but not through religion.
I believe that seeing the Northern Lights in Canada, would be my transcendence.
It's too cold there; Freezing! However, people say that the lights of the Aurora Borealis warm our souls.
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Hi Johnson! Thank you for looking my note. I'll be happy if later you could make corrections. And I can follow him on italki?
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There are a few mistakes, i think. But it's not convenient for me to correct them on my phone. Mayb i will do it later.
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