Internet era?

There is no doubt that the internet has completely changed our lives, however how has this unique invention changed our lives?

I do not hesitate to state that it has provoked the beginning of a new era. As a result of evolution we have developed billions of devices, ranging from the wheel to the phone, but just a few of them have influenced our world as much as the internet has.

I remember going to the library so as to look for some encyclopedias or newspapers ten years ago; they were it was absolutely crowded. Now they libraries are almost empty and seem to be extremely antique ancient or old-fashioned institutions. This is a clear proof of the vertiginous pace that at which we are evolving and that fortunately, but sadly, we are getting older.

Besides In addition, it also gives us the opportunity of reaching to share another kind of information, the personal one type. Never before world citizens have world citizens been so near. Global communications have become a daily fact, though we usually forget how marvelous this fact is. For example, my grandmother always is awesomed in awe/amazed when we talk by webcam. It is obvious that she was born in another age, but she is a clear example of how we get used to things and we do not really appreciate them. (Actually, if she's still in awe, then it seems as if she does appreciate the change.)

We all know his cons the drawbacks/disadvantages: the war against privacy has just broken out and in a few years we will see the consequences. Never before has information has been so available, but either ours ones. that includes our personal information.

In conclusion, the internet has brought us the opportunity of reaching to access all or almost all information with just one click. No more libraries or book stores, just servers and a huge, huge cloud.

Internet era?

There is no doubt that the internet has completely changed our lives; however, how has this unique invention changed our lives (plural noun to match "our")?

I do not hesitate in stating (or to state) that it has provoked the beggining beginning of a new era. As a result of evolution, we have developed billions of devices, ranging from the wheel to the phone, but just few of them have influenced our world as much the internet has.

I remember going to the library so as to look for some encyclopedias or newspapers ten years ago and seeing that they were absolutely crowded (full/packed). Now they are almost empty and seem to be extremely archaic or old-fashioned institutions. This is a clear proof of the rapid pace that we evolve at or that fortunately, but sadly, we are getting older.

Besides, it also gives us the opportunity of accessing other kinds of information, like personal information. Never before have world citizens  been so near. Global communications have become a daily fact, though we usually forget how marvelous this fact is. For example, my grandmother always is amazed when we talk by (over) webcam, It is obvious that she was born in another age but she is a clear example of how we get used to things and we do not really appreciate them.

We all know the cons of technology, the war on privacy has just broken out and in a few years we will see the consequences. Never before has information been so accessible, but either ours ones (?).

In conclusion, the internet has brought us the opportunity of accessing all or almost all information with just one click. No more libraries nor book stores, just servers and a huge, huge cloud.