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Will you help me with the translation of the lyrics of the song "Goddness of the toilet"? (2) どうしてだろう 人(ひと)は人(を)傷付(きずつ)け 大切(たいせつ)なものをなくしてく いつも味方(みかた)をしてくれてた おばあちゃん残(のこ)して ひとりきり 家(いえ)離(はな)れた 上京(じょうきょう)して2年(にねん)が過(す)ぎて おばあちゃんが入院(にゅういん)した 痩(や)せて 細(ほそ)くなってしまった おばあちゃんに会(あ)いに行(い)った I wonder why people hurt somebody and lose the important things I left Grandma home alone who had been on my side and always with a friend Left home alone Moved to Tokyo two years after Grandma was hospitalized Became thin and skinny I went to see her 「おばあちゃん、ただいまー!」ってわざと 昔(むかし)みたいに言ってみたけど ちょっと話しただけだったのに [もう帰りー。]って 病室を出された 次の日の朝 おばあちゃんは 静(しず)かに眠(ねむ)りについた “Grandma, granny, I’m!” I deliberately I would only say a little old, but like I said “Oh way back now.” I issued the hospital The next morning Grandma Slept quietly まるで まるで 私(わたし)が来(く)るのを  待(ま)っていてくれたように Though if I were to come As she wait for me ちゃんと育(そだ)ててくれたのに  恩返(おんがえ)しもしてないのに いい孫(まご)じゃなかったのに こんな私(わたし)を待(ま)っててくれたんやね トイレには それはそれはキレイな 女神様がいるんやで おばあちゃんがくれた言葉(ことば)は  今日(きょう)の私(わたし)を べっぴんさんにしてくれてるかな I’m not giving back, but also trained me perfectly I’m not your good granddaughter You wanted me to wait for me and this That it is a beautiful bathroom The Goddess and are there My grandmother gave me the word of the day that can make me Beppin. I wonder if. トイレには それはそれはキレイな 女神様(めがみさま)がいるんやで だから毎日(まいにち) キレイにしたら 女神様(めがみさま)みたいに べっぴんさんになれるんやで 気立(きだ)ての良(よ)いお嫁(よめ)さんになるのが 夢(ゆめ)だった私(わたし)は 今日(きょう)も せっせとトイレを  ピーカピカにする That it is a beautiful bathroom The Goddess and are there After the beautiful goddess like evey day I become friends with and Beppin The bride is a good-natured I had a dream I busy today sparkly clean toilet おばあちゃん おばあちゃん ありがとう おばあちゃん ホンマに ありがとう Grandma Thanks Grandma Grandma Really Thanks

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Hi, zhoujun, I'm surprised to hear you have been studying Japanese by yourself for a year. It's great you could write such excellent Japanese sentences. You are competent in Japanese writing. "トイレの神様” is one of the most popular songs nowadays in Japan. This great song is sung in which people nowadays almost forgot family love, feeling to return the favor people who gave us and taught us how to live and this song can touch anybody’s heartstrings. I’ve seen many Chinese listening this song and weeping on TV.I was moved to find out that people have the same feeling for their families as we do, even though people live in different countries with different cultures. I wish you’re keeping up studying Japanese in the future. See you, Ikuko いえいえ zhoujunさん 日本語が とてもお上手ですよ。独学で 一年間日本語を勉強して、これ程の日本文を書けたなら 立派ですよ。 「トイレの神様」は家族愛を歌った名曲です。現代人が忘れかけていた家族への愛、生き方を教えてくれた昔の人達への尊敬と、恩に報いる気持ちが表れていて、どんな人の心の琴線にも触れる名曲です。 中国の方達が この歌を聴き 涙を流している姿をテレビで見ました。家族への思いは、どの国の人達にも共通であり、訴えるものなのだと感動しました。 これからも日本語の勉強を頑張って下さいね。それでは。
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thank you,ikuko.my grandmother is fine,and now she living alone in rural area,i haven't seen her for a year. T_T ,i miss she so much. 「トイレの神様」は中国でもとても人気がある。僕はこの曲を聞くたびに何度もなきたい、この曲が伝える深く家族の愛情は僕を感動させておく、おばあさんへの思いはもっと深くになり! Ikuko.僕は日本が好きだから、一年前に一人で日本語を勉強しています。だから、日本語はまだまだ下手ですから、しゃべりもうまくできないし、ご指導をお願いします。
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Hi, zhoujun, I'm really sorry that I thought you made comments about my writing referring about your mother. However, you actually corrected my writing, didn't you? I really appreciate your correction. See you, Ikuko
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Hi, zhoujun, how are you doing? How's your grandmother? I wish your grandmother's fine. This song is one of the most popular recently in Japan and makes us cry. I guess we have the same feelings and emotions for our families as other people do in different countries. Thank you for your comment about my writing. See you, Ikuko
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Moved to Tokyo two years later My grandma was hospitalized She became thin and weak and I went to see her

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