Preparinf for the integrated writting task in TOEFL Hello to everyone !) Now I'm preparing for one day I will be participating in TOEFl ...)) So, this is my first experience in doing this task..I will very grateful if someone check my essay and put my attention on mistakes. If you have some tips for passing the TOEFL, I will glad to listen them :) The lecturer stated that organizing a small business has a lot of troubles and even has fewer advantages than being an employ in any corporation. Author of a reading passage did not agree with him and suggest his opinion to lecturer’s points of view. Firstly, the man said that small business is not protected from bureaucracy: for example, obtaining a license may take a long period of time because of its procedure. Also a business partner can cause a problem: if businessman has opposite thoughts about a certain subjects, it can create a conflict which may lead to dividing a company and also difficult bureaucracy operation. The passage states that owners of small business follow their hearts and priorities and realize all of their business desires in their work. Secondly, the lecturer declares, that if you have your own company, you cannot delay on someone expect yourself as employ who can find a job with support of other people. In text it is said that employ has a chance to lose his job in any moment. Third, it was said by professor, that having your own company is not a guarantee of your good retirement – it is still laying in your hands, though some sentences in passage claim that being in a corporation has a less amount of advantages to a future retirement than being an owner of a small business.