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The Future Star—Jeremy Lin Yao Ming is Chinese most famous basketball player, he is famous around the world. But the damage of the body makes him retire early, he has to out of race course. People are looking for the next Yao Ming, for they need a hero to watch NBA. ,, his name is Jeremy Lin, who is from Taiwan. The guy plays so well that everyone calls him little Yao Ming. Jeremy Lin studies inHarvardUniversity, his talent in basketball has showed, he led the school team won the champion, the NBA agent saw his ability, Jeremy signed a team and started his career in NBA. At first, he didn’t get much chance to show himself, his first year was not brilliant. Actually, even Yao Ming, his first year was just a by passer to his own team, he even laughed by others. So the first was always hard for the new player. The next year, Jeremy has show his talent, he got the chance to prove himself, he helped the team beat other team, people started notice him, still, his second not makes him a worldwide star. Then the third year, the whole summer people were talking about him, they speak highly of him, people see his talent. Jeremy has proved himself, he becomes the future star, he owns his success to his hard work.

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The Future Star—Jeremy Lin

Yao Ming was China's most famous basketball player. He is famous around the world, but the damage to his body made him retire early, so he is out of the picture. People are looking for the next Yao Ming, because they need a hero to watch in the NBA. The new basketball legend is Jeremy Lin, who is from Taiwan. The guy plays so well that everyone calls him little Yao Ming.
Jeremy Lin studied at Harvard University and his talent in basketball was apparent. He led the school to an Ivy League championship and an NBA agent saw his ability. Jeremy signed with a team and started his career in the NBA. At first, he didn’t get much of a chance to show himself and his first year was not brilliant. Actually, even Yao Ming in his first year was just a passer and he was even laughed at by others. So the first year is always hard for a new player.
The next year, Jeremy displayed his talent. He got the chance to prove himself and helped his team win games, but his second year still did not make him a worldwide star. Then the third year, the whole summer people were talking about him, speaking highly of him, and people realized his talent. Jeremy has proved himself, and he is the future star. He owes his success to his hard work.

 

I really enjoyed watching Yao Ming play. It was too bad his career was cut short. He was very talented.

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