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SOLITUDE I’m enjoying my loneliness Because I can hear the voice of raindrops Because I can feel the wind’s blowing Because I can see the greenish view of trees, flowers, and mountains Because I can cheerfully looking up where the birds fly over Because I can privately waiting for the morning due, sometimes I’m enjoying my little escape Because I can truly be myself this way Because I can contemplate what I’m thinking about Because I can continue my life without bothered the others Because I can avoid the bad things I won’t to hear Because I can go wherever I want without anybody knows I’m enjoying my solitude When I’ll go deep inside my thought When I’ll feel my gifted life by my Lord When I’ll realized what my Lord aim for creating me, us, them When I’ll knowing that me, us, them are we When I’ll make sure that there is much to do So, I go out after solitude To fulfill what my Lord want from me To live my life To live with others life To make my life more valuable than ever To take a step by step till the end of the day Masjid A.Yani, Kahuripan, Malang 2:07 PM, 3/17/2014

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SOLITUDE

I’m enjoying my loneliness
Because I can hear the voice of raindrops
Because I can feel the wind’s blowing
Because I can see the greenish view of trees, flowers, and mountains
Because I can cheerfully look up where the birds fly over
Because I can privately wait for the morning due, sometimes

I’m enjoying my little escape
Because I can truly be myself this way
Because I can contemplate what I’m thinking about
Because I can continue my life without bothered by others
Because I can avoid the bad things I don't want to hear
Because I can go wherever I want without anybody knowing 

I’m enjoying my solitude
When I’ll go deep inside my thought
When I’ll feel my gifted life by my Lord
When I’ll realized what my Lord aims for creating me, us, them
When I’ll know that me, us, them are we
When I’ll make sure that there is much to do

So, I go out after solitude
To fulfill what my Lord wants from me
To live my life
To live with others' lives 
To make my life more valuable than ever
To take a step by step 'till the end of the day

 

Beautiful! Well done!



Masjid A.Yani, Kahuripan, Malang 2:07 PM, 3/17/2014

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