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Do you like films? (poster) Are you a film enthusiast? Do you enjoy discussing plots? Are you looking for a place to share points of view and make good friends? The College Film Club is waiting for you. WHAT EXACTLY IS THE FILM CLUB? One of the most unsatisfying aspects of watching a film at the cinema is probably the high cost of tickets. Don't worry, every Monday evening different kinds of films are played at the College Theatre, admission is, of course, free for all visitors. In addition, you will have the opportunity to take part in discussions in English after every film, thereby improving your speaking and sharing your ideas with people from all over the world. A GREAT WAY TO MAKE FRIENDS Fancy a cup of tea? In our coffee bar, which is open late from 8 pm to midnight, every visitor has at their disposal, a large range of cold and hot beverages to choose from. Our longe is the perfect place to make friends and have a good time with great company. Once a month, we celebrate the Cinephile's Night, inviting special guests from the world of entertainment. Actors like Jonathan Rhys Meyers (The Tudors) or Liam Neeson have already talked with us about interesting aspects of films and plots. FORTHCOMING EVENTS We are always planning new events in our club. We invite you to join us and to take part in future talks with Sir Sean Connery (Next September) or in a special trip to the Studio Aka (animation studio) based in London on 14th August.

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Do you like films? (poster)

Are you a film enthusiast? Do you enjoy discussing plots? Are you looking for a place to share points of view and make good friends? The College Film Club is waiting for you.

WHAT EXACTLY IS THE FILM CLUB?
One of the most unsatisfactory aspects of watching a film at the cinema is probably the high cost of tickets. Don't worry, every Monday evening different kinds of films are played at the College Theatre, admission is, of course, free for all visitors.

In addition, you will have the opportunity to take part in discussions in English after every film, thereby improving your speaking and sharing your ideas with people from all over the world.

A GREAT WAY TO MAKE FRIENDS
Fancy a cup of tea? In our coffee bar, which is open late from 8 pm to midnight, every visitor has at their disposal, a large range of cold and hot beverages to choose from. Our lounge is the perfect place to make friends and have a good time with great company.

Once a month, we celebrate the Cinephile's Night, inviting special guests from the world of entertainment. Actors like Jonathan Rhys Meyers (The Tudors) or Liam Neeson have already talked with us about interesting aspects of films and plots.

FORTHCOMING EVENTS
We are always planning new events in our club. We invite you to join us and to take part in future talks with Sir Sean Connery (Next September) or in a special trip to the Studio Aka (animation studio) based in London on 14th August.

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Do you like films? (poster)

Are you a film enthusiast? Do you enjoy discussing plots? Are you looking for a place to (share points of view) share/exchange opinions/views and make good friends? The College Film Club is (waiting) just the place OR the perfect place for you.

WHAT EXACTLY IS THE FILM CLUB?
One of the most unsatisfying (contrary to the first responder, I think 'unsatisfying' is a better word than 'unsatisfactory'. 'Unsatisfactory' seems to denote more of a failure to meet expectations, but 'unsatisfying' denotes that that the enjoyment is compromised. The expensive tickets compromises the enjoyment of watching a film in cinema rather than causes the experiencing of watching a film to fall short of expectations.) aspects of watching a film at the cinema is probably the high cost of tickets. (Don't worry, every Monday evening different kinds of films are played at the College Theatre admission is, of course, free for all visitors.) But not to worry, for admission to film screenings every Monday evening at the College Theatre is free for all visitors.  

In addition, you will have the opportunity to take part in English discussions (in English) after every film, thereby improving your speaking proficiency and enabling you to share (sharing) your ideas with people from all over the world.

A GREAT WAY TO MAKE FRIENDS
Fancy a cup of tea? In our coffee bar, which is open late from 8 pm to midnight, every visitor has, at their disposal, a large range of cold and hot beverages to choose from. Our lounge is the perfect place to make friends and have a good time with great company.

Once a month, we celebrate the Cinephile's Night, inviting special guests from the world of entertainment. Actors like Jonathan Rhys Meyers (The Tudors) or Liam Neeson have already talked with us about interesting aspects of films and plots.

FORTHCOMING EVENTS
We are always planning new events in our club. We invite you to join us and to take part in future talks with Sir Sean Connery (Next September) or in a special trip to the Studio Aka (animation studio) based in London on 14th August.

 

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Hi David!!! Hope this helped :) In red are grammar corrections and in green are some suggestions on a better way to convey the ideas in the journal. 

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