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遺失的心跳 先前我看了蕭亞軒的「遺失的心跳」MV,好美麗,好傷心啊。在音樂視頻,該城市好喜歡喔~我猜是台灣的大城市一樣喔。需要來啦〜感覺我的經驗會是驚人。也會精神加強和改進台灣的喔

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遺失的心跳

先前(or 之前)我看了蕭亞軒的「遺失的心跳」MV,好美麗也好傷心啊!好喜歡MV畫面中的城市~我猜是臺灣的大城市。

 

需要來啦〜感覺我的經驗會是驚人。也會精神加強和改進台灣的喔

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遺失的心跳

先前我看了蕭亞軒的「遺失的心跳」MV,好美麗也好傷心啊。在音樂視頻,好喜歡這城市喔~我猜是這像台灣的大城市一樣。需要來啦〜感覺我會有很驚人的經驗,也會加強精神和改進台灣喔。

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你要來台灣 可以來台南找我 我家沙發可以借你衝浪
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遺失的心跳

先前我看了蕭亞軒的「遺失的心跳」MV,好美麗,好傷心啊。在音樂視頻,該城市好喜歡喔~我猜是台灣的大城市一樣喔。需要來啦〜感覺我的經驗會是驚人。也會精神加強和改進台灣的喔

 

The followings are my suggestions:

先前我看了蕭亞軒的「遺失的心跳」MV,好美麗,也很感傷啊。在音樂MV,我好喜歡這個城市喔~我猜是台灣的大城市。我好想去喔〜我想要去體驗。我也會持續加強和改進中文喔。

 

Note:

1. The MV was shooted at Xinyi district in Taipei city and near to Taipei 101. That area is very populated.

2. Have you read the lyrics of 「遺失的心跳」? It is a sad song...

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嗨,我是一个中国女孩,我想教你学中文,同时你也可以教我英文,好吗? hi! I am a Chinese girl and I would like to teach you Chinese, you can teach me English at the same time. Can we be friends?

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