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I most want to go national I most want to go national is spain,because I am very like it.In fact,Idont know it,only knew the Bullfighting,Flamingo,cowparade and their super-powerful football team.I was attracted to it because it is a popular tourist Kingdom,There are sunshine,beautiful beaches,warm people and food.so I want to see the beautiful country...

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I want to go to this country

I want to  go to the country is Spain, because I am very like it very much. In fact, I don't know it.  I only know about the Bullfighting, Flamingoes, the Cowparade and their football team. I was attracted to it because it is a popular tourist country. There is sunshine, beautiful beaches and food. So I want to see this beautiful country...

 

Note: that is a good post. There are some mistakes with spacing after punctuation (always leave a space after punctuation like . , ! ? )

I have changed cowparade to Cowparade because it is a proper name.

All in all, a good effort !

 

 

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I  want to go to the country

I  wanna go to the country is spain,because I am very like it.In fact,Idont know it,only knew the Bullfighting,Flamingo,cowparade and their football team.I was attracted to it because it is a popular tourist country,There are sunshine,beautiful beaches and food.so I want to see the beautiful country...

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