My school
My school is about 30 miles away from the city center. I drive 40 minutes to school every day. The way is boring. So I listen to some music. Sometimes, I get up late. As a result, I have to drive as fast as I can. There are many cars on the way, especially the rush hour. It seems that everybody is hurried to work. The cars always want to overtake another cars. Actually It's dangerous. More time, I would rather live in school to avoid the danger on the way. The school is over at half past four. Then, I have supper. After that, I have nothing to do. Go back to dorm, listen to music, read books, play with the phone, and sleep. Next day is the same day as the last day.
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My school
My school is about 30 miles away from the city center. I drive 40 minutes to school every day. The way is boring, so I listen to some music. Sometimes, I get up late. As a result, I have to drive as fast as I can. There are many cars on the way, especially the rush hour. It seems that everybody is hurried hurrying to work. The cars always want to overtake another other cars. Actually, It's dangerous. More time, Sometimes, I would rather live in school to avoid the danger on the way. The School is over at half past four. Then, I have supper. After that, I have nothing to do. Go back to dorm, listen to music, read books, play with the phone, and sleep. Next day is the same day as the last day.
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My school
My school is about 30 miles away from the city center. I drive 40 minutes to school every day. The way is boring. So I listen to some music. Sometimes, I get up late. As a result, I have to drive as fast as I can. There are many cars on the way, especially during the rush hour. It seems that everybody is in a hurry to work. The cars always want to overtake another cars. Actually it's dangerous. Most times, I would rather live in school to avoid the danger on the way. The school is over at half past four. Then, I have supper. After that, I have nothing to do. Go back to dorm, listen to music, read books, play with the phone, and sleep. The next day is the same day as the last day.
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My school
My school is about 30 miles away from the city center. I drive 40 minutes to school every day. The trip is boring so I listen to some music. Sometimes, I get up late. As a result, I have to drive as fast as I can. There are many cars in the way, especially at rush hour. It seems that everybody is hurrying to work. The cars always want to overtake other cars. It's quite dangerous. Sometimes, I would rather live in school to avoid the danger on the way. The school is over at half past four. Then, I have supper. After that, I have nothing to do. Go back to dorm, listen to music, read books, play with the phone, and sleep. Next day is the same day as the last day.
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