The Trouble

Last month, my best friend called me and invited me to her wedding anniversary. At first I was confused whether to go or not, but finally I decided to go. Her house was in the countryside. After a long trip I arrived and had fun, dancing and joking; but what I didn't expect is that because I arrived late, it was getting dark and I hadn't even told my parents where I was going. I left the party and started running, but unfortunately I missed the bus. Therefore, I decided to go to my sister's house. When I arrived, my sister was startled because she thought that something bad had happened to me; and after 5 minutes someone knocked at the door. It was my father and he blamed me and slapped me in my face. We came back home and from that moment until today, I tell my parents about every step I take.

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The Trouble

Last month my best friend called me and invited me to her wedding anniversary. First I was confused whether to go or not but finally I decided to go. Her house was in the country side. After a long way I arrived. I had fun: danced, joked, etc... but what I didn't expect is that is that I am late, it was getting dark and I didn't even told my parents where am I. I left the party and started to run but unfortunately I missed the bus. Therfore I decided to go to my sisiter's house. When I arrived, my sister was startled, she thought that something bad happened to me, and after 5 minutes someone knocked the door. It was my father. He blamed me and slaped me in my face and we came back home and since that moment I tell my parents about every step I take.