The true meaning of life
It's unbelievable that man can born and live in the earth. The world is created by human and we make it become more and more colorful. As scientific and technological developing , the connection of each country become closer and closer.
Many people wanted to improved the quality of their life that try to moving into the other developed country.But,is that a good way for improving their life? Different people have different definition.I just think about what is the most important for our life?Such as money,power or love? If I only can choose one ,I will choose love.Wherever you are,love will always make you happy .Happiness is the true meaning of life.
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The true meaning of life
It's unbelievable that man can be born and live on the earth. The world is created by humans and we make it become more and more colorful. As science and technology is developing , the connection of each country is becomeing closer and closer.
Many people wanted to improved the quality of their life so they try to moving into the other developed countries.But,is that a good way for improving their life? Different people have different definitions.I just think, about what is the most important for our life?Such as money,power or love? If I can only choose one ,I will choose love.Wherever you are,love will always make you happy .Happiness is the true meaning of life.
You have lovely writing! Make sure you write more! I agree with you too :-)
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That's a nice writing. I read an article and it has a quote that I really like "A happy life doesn't come from financial success--but money is a tool to get a better life."
Hehe, just a bit but do you think that without money happiness cannot complete. (I don't know if I'm right using "complete" in this case, or perfect much better ?^^)
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' The world is created by human and we make it become more and more colorful. '
Can you tell me who created the Hymalaya Mountain? Or who paints a sunset in the sky? (not on paper, of course)
I think you meant that people improve the conditions we live in, or if this isn't what you meant~~ can you answer my first two questions? :D
[This is an absolutely inoffensive comment.]
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