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The Bitter Moon Today I want to tell about my favourite film. It is the Bitter Moon. It seems strange but not everyone can understand its. It is a story about relationship between male and female. Sometimes love is gone but what to do if female loves you else. Such woman can begin to revenge. It is a pain because your love story hadn't continue. Their love was game where everyone wanted to hurt each other.

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The Bitter Moon

Today I want to tell about my favourite film. It is called The Bitter Moon. It seems strange but not everyone can understand it. its. It is a story about a relationship between a male and a female. Sometimes love goes away; is gone but what do you do to do if the female loves someone you else? Such a woman can begin to plot revenge. It is a painful because your love story can't hadn't continue. Their love was a game where everyone wanted to hurt each other.

 

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This sounds like a sad film!  I agree with Winston - your 5th sentence is not very clear.  Does the male leave the female?  Or does the female leave the male?  It sound like the female leaves, because you say that she wants revenge.  But, it is not very clear.  It is a very good summary though!  I am interested in watching it!

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The Bitter Moon

Today I want to tell you about my favourite film. It is the Bitter Moon. It seems strange but not everyone can understand its. It is a story about the relationship between males and females. Sometimes love is gone but what are you to do if the female loves you someone else. Such a woman can begin to become revenge vengeful. It is a pain because your love story hadn't can't continue. Their love was a game where everyone wanted to hurt eachother.

 

Very good grammatically, but the meaning was a little confusing in the 5th sentence ("Sometimes love is gone...)

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