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Envy, fear, lonelyness, rage...I like it!!!
When I tell it to somebody, they normally respond tell me that I'm crazy. -"How can you like those awful feelings?"- It is simple! simply! I am just getting stronger, and there is adrenaline in my blood when I feel something like this. similar. You might ask me, "Why do you need adrenaline?" Ooo...I'm too lazy to do something...but if I am very, very angry, I can do impossible improbable things! Sometimes when I am lazy, I try to call cause my black angels, and I force them to play under my pipe. So when I am going to do something, I must anger make myself angry... It is just me. And what go nuts you suffer?
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I force them to play under my pipe - Winston is correct - this is an idiom that English does not have. I'm not sure if there is an English equivalent! I will have to think about it! =)
Also, you do not need the "-" after the quotation marks.
Otherwise, very good! Please keep practicing!
Envy, fear, lonelyness, rage...I like it!!!
When I tell it this to somebody, they normally respond by telling me that I'm crazy. "How can you like those awful feelings?"- It is simply simple! I am just getting become stronger and there is adrenaline in my blood when I feel something similar. You may ask me "why do you need adrenaline?" Ooo...I'm too lazy to do something...but If I am very very angry I can do improbable difficult things! Sometimes when I am lazy I try to (cause my black angels and I force them to play under my pipe). So when I am going to do something I must anger make myself angry...It is just me. (And what go nuts you suffer?)
Your grammar is good but some of the things you say here do not make sense. My guess is that they are idiomatic to your language and therefore do not translate into English in a meaningful way.
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