2014/3/9 diary

Today, I put what I (had) learnt from 'Thinking Map',  into practice. Definitely, it is a helpful tool to assist your comprehension (comprehensing) and memory. In order to improve, (,well) what I need to do (improve) is (try) to look through the whole book before reading (i read) it carefully. That way, (,so that) I can get an outline of the book and so (thus i can) develop (make) a more effective learning method. (organised map .)

good night*^_^*

Quite complicated sentences but your structure and word order were sound. I have suggested a couple of amendments. BTW in your italki address you mention the phrase 'very unique' but something can only be 'unique' or 'non unique' ....  you can't say 'quite unique' for example. Unique means 'one form'  

2014/3/9 diary

Today I put into practice what I had learnt from the Mind Thinking Map into practice.It is definitely Definitely, it is a helpful tool to assist for comprehension and memory. ,well What I need to do improve is try to look through the hole book before I read it carefully,so that I can get  an outline of the  story book thus i can and make a more effective organised map . 

good night*^_^*