2014/3/8 diary Yesterday was the GITLS' festival,to celebrate it all the male classmates of our class did many delicious dishes for all the girls.Because they were so tasty,once a dish was finished,i

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2014/3/8 diary Yesterday was the GITLS' festival,to celebrate it all the male classmates of our class did many delicious dishes for all the girls.Because they were so tasty,once a dish was finished,it was eaten up immediately.I am proud of having such gental and skillful in cooking classmates! Today is a sunny day,a precious perfect weather in Chengdu.I go to a quiet classroom alone,reviewing my INTERMEDIATE ACCOUNTING course.The sunshine flow in the room and warm my heart,it is very comfortable.I practice my oral English by myself,although I really enjoy the tranquil and warm,I prefer to having a foreign friend who can practice with me~ GOOD NIGHT HAVE A GOOD DREAM

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2014/3/8 diary

Yesterday was the GITLS' festival. To celebrate it all the male classmates in our class made many delicious dishes for all the girls. Because they were so tasty, once a dish was finished, it was eaten up immediately. I am proud of having such gentle classmates who are skillful in cooking!

Today is a sunny day, precious perfect weather in Chengdu. I am going to a quiet classroom alone, reviewing my INTERMEDIATE ACCOUNTING course.The sunshine flows in the room and warms my heart. It is very comfortable. I practice my oral English by myself, although I really enjoy the tranquility and warmth, I prefer to have a foreign friend who can practice with me~
GOOD NIGHT HAVE A GOOD DREAM

Thank you for your suggestions.I will try to do them

chuizide, foreingers are not that good to communicate. if you really want to improve your english, follow the english movies and try to repeat what the actors say. insist on your writing. if possible, set aside some time to memorize some highly frequence words.

Thank you for your kindness:)

gental = gentle I would use past tense on second paragraph as well. Today was a sunny day. The weather was perfect in Chengdu. I went to...to review ... The sunshine...my heart, that made me feel very comfortable. I practice..myself. Although I ... I'm not native English speaker, so I'm not so sure about my suggestion :D. You write well, just some sentence structure mistakes.

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