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who can help me modify it.3Q when I was young, i 'd like to go to the library to borrow some of the novels on the campus, there are about life, about dreams, and even a vague feeling between men and women. And grow up a little, i was begin to look at a variety of domestic and foreign classics, My deepest impression, until now still like to see is that JK Rowling's "Harry Potter." Harry Potter series, a total of seven. Seen from junior middle school to junior high school. I remember that time, some of the more affluent students will look at the first time to buy, and and we raced to borrow come over to see ,At that time, many people like to see Harry Potter, so everyone reading speed will very soon, because the back will be slow to see the person accused. Recall holding so thick book, feel is well by page after page .. Harry Potter is not just good novel, the film is also good-looking ,Harry was wearing round glasses, really cute. And now, as the growth of the age, little Harry has become mature,, Harry has grown into a struggle with evil people in story. My favorite book is Harry Potter, because it's grown with me, so my school-day was rich.

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When I was young, I enjoyed going to the library to borrow novels. They were about life, about dreams, and even the feelings between men and women.  As I grew up, I began to read a variety of foreign and domestic classics. Even now, the book that left the deepest impression on me was the JK Rowling's series "Harry Potter", a total of seven books. 

I read this series from junior middle school to junior high school. At that time, some of the more affluent students would buy the books new, and the rest of us would compete to borrow them from each other. At that time, many people enjoyed Harry Potter, so our reading speed increased quickly, because otherwise the would be accused of of reading too slowly. I Recall holding the book. It was so thick, it felt wonderful just reading by page after page.

 Harry Potter was not just good novel, the film was also excellent. Harry was really cute wearing round glasses. And as each movie arrived, he grew in age. We could watch him mature. Harry grew up during his struggle with the evil in story. 

Harry Potter was my favorite book, because the novel grew up with me, making the experience of my school-days richer.

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who can help me modify it.3Q

  when I young, I enjoyed  borrowing  some of the novels in  the school library , some of  which is about life and dreams, and others of which is about  even a vague feeling between men and women. 

  As I am growing up gradually, I was beginning  to read a variety of domestic and foreign classics, My deepest impression, until now I still like to see, is  JK Rowling's "Harry Potter."
  Harry Potter series, a total of seven and they are read  from junior middle school to senior high school. I remembered some of the more affluent students were the first to buy, and  we took turns borrowing  to see at that time , for this reason that many people were intereted in  Harry Potter,  everyone was required to read  quickly, because the person who is slow  will be complained.Though holding this so thick book,we  felt  happy to read  page by page ..
  Harry Potter is not just good novel, its film is also good-looking ,Harry wearing round glasses is really cute. And now, as he is growing gradually, little Harry has become mature and has grown into a strong man struggling with evils in book.
  My favorite book is Harry Potter, because it was growing with me, haveing it made my school-day  rich.

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