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story about superstitions. This story is about a handsome boy that was walking around the park while he was thinking about travel around the world. Mike was a boy that wanted to travel around all the world, because he wanted to meet many interesting countries like Ireland. One day, Mike took the desicion about go to irland to have fun and meet more about this country, so he started to pack his suitcase. Her mother was very superstitious, so she told Mike that he was careful with some superstitions but he didnt care that because he didnt believe in that. The next morning, Mike got up with left feet and went to take a shower. He was very anxious about the trip, so he didnt sleep that night. When he was ready for the trip, he went to take a taxi to go the airport but when he was waiting the taxi, suddenly started to rain so, he ran to his home. When the rain stopped, Mike went out to find a taxi and while he was walking on the street with his suitcases, a black cat crossed by his side so in that moment, Mike recalled that his mother had told him that if a black cat walked by his side , he could have bad luck during the day. but he didnt pay atention to that. Then, Mike stopped in a restaurant for buy his breakfast, and when the waiter brought him his breakfast, he spilled the salt that was on the table. in that moment, Mike again recalled that his friends had said that when some one spill a salt, could have bad luck during 7 years but he didnt care, so he ate his breakfast, paid the bill and left. Mike was arriving airport but he didnt feel good, he was tired because he had walking for a long time. he never found a taxi to go the airport. He thought that didnt passing a taxi because it was sunday and usually there are not taxis on sundays. He continued walking and when he arrived to the airport suddenly he started to sneeze and in that moment he fell sick. Finally, Mike gave flu because he had been under rain while he was waiting for a taxi, but he recalled all superstitions that his mother, his friend and all people had said, so he returned at his home with his mother and he promised that would be careful with the superstitions.

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A story about superstitions.

This story is about a handsome boy that was walking around the park while he was thinking about travelling around the world.

Mike was a boy that wanted to travel around all the world, because he wanted to meet go to many interesting countries like Ireland.

One day, Mike took the desicion decision about to go to irland Ireland to have fun and meet learn more about this country, so he started to pack his suitcase. Her His mother was very superstitious, so she told Mike that he was to be careful with of some superstitions. But he didnt care that because he didnt believe in that them.

The next morning, Mike got up with his left feet foot and went to take a shower. He was very anxious about the trip, so he didnt sleep hadn't slept that night. When he was ready for the trip, he went to take a taxi to go the airport. but When he was waiting for the taxi, it suddenly started to rain so, he ran to his home. When the rain stopped, Mike went out to find a taxi. and While he was walking on the street with his suitcases, a black cat crossed by his side. so i In that moment, Mike recalled that his mother had told him that if a black cat walked by his side , he could have bad luck during the day, but he didnt pay attention to that.

Then, Mike stopped in a restaurant for to buy his breakfast, and when the waiter brought him his breakfast, he spilled the salt that was on the table. in that moment, Mike again recalled that his friends had said that when some one spills a salt, he could have bad luck during for 7 years, but he didnt care, so he ate his breakfast, paid the bill and left.

Mike was arriving arrived at the airport but he didnt feel good, he was tired because he had been walking for a long time, as he never found had failed to find a taxi to go the airport. He thought that didnt passing a taxi it was because it was Sunday and usually there are not taxis on Sundays. He continued walking and when he arrived to at the airport suddenly he started to sneeze. and in that moment He fell had fallen sick.

Finally, Mike gave had caught the flu because he had been under in the rain while he was waiting for a taxi. He recalled all the superstitions that his mother, his friends and all other people had said warned of, so he returned at his home with to his mother and he promised that he would be careful with the superstitions in the future.


The poor guy! I hope that he made it to Ireland in the end!  

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thanks! but do you have any correction ? :)
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Your history is funny. But take care with the sentence's time.

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