My last films

Hello Prim,

I like going to the cinema. Last month, I went to the cinema and I watched many films. I prefered wacthing films about mathematics contents. For example, I watched the film called "A Beautiful Mind". It is my favourite film beacuse it is about Nash's life. Nash was an important math teacher in Oxford. Nash was clever in Mathematics but he was ill. He got married and he had a child with his wife. His wife always helped him.
I enjoyed it beacuse I love math and I like Nash's life. I cried in the end beacuse he died but the film was exciting!


Hola Alberto!

Esta nota fue un 6! Excelente! Tu escribes muy bien el ingles. En Canada decimos "go to the movies" en lugar de "go to the cinema", pero es siendo correcta!

Brian

My last films

Hello Prim,

I like going to the cinema. Last month, I went to the cinema and I watched many films. I prefered watching films with mathematical content. For example, I watched the film called "A Beautiful Mind". It is my favourite film beacuse it is about Nash's life. Nash was a important math teacher in Oxford. Nash was a clever Mathemetician, but he was ill. He got married and he had a child with his wife. His wife always helped him.
I enjoyed it beacuse I love math and like Nash's life. I cryed in the end beacuse he died but the film was exciting!


Please, if you correct this note, can you do a mark between 1(bad)- 5(very good)? Thank you!

Hola Prim, no es perfecto pero es muy bien - 4. :)