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My School Our school lies in the south of Shanghai. It has a long history. There are more than 20,000 students in our school. The four-storey building is our classroom building. There is a school hall, a library, a music room, a language lab, computer rooms and so on. In front of the building, there is a fountain and a garden. The playground is on the right of library. There is also a dormitory building and a canteen. Our school is big and beautiful. We all enjoy our school life here very much.

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Very standard chinese writing ,this short article made me thought of my campus period. Haahaha
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My School

 

Our school, with its long history, lies to (in) the south of Shanghai and caters for more than 20,000 students. Our classroom is situated within a (the) four-storey building. ( is our classroom building.) The school is made up of (There is) a (school) hall, a library, a music room, a language lab, computer rooms and so on. In front of the building, there is a fountain and a garden. The playground is on the right of the library. There is also a dormitory building and a canteen.
Our school is big and beautiful (.) and we all enjoy our school life here very much.

 

 

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My School

Our school lies in the south of Shanghai. It has a long history.
There are more than 20,000 students in our school. The four-storey building is our classroom building. There is a school hall, a library, a music room, a language lab, computer rooms and so on. In front of the building, there is a fountain and a garden. The playground is on the right of library. There is also a dormitory building and a canteen (cafeteria? Like place where you eat food?).
Our school is big and beautiful. We all enjoy our school life here very much.

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