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The Travellers You were walking along the road,slowly and carefully.Looking around now and then,you found the travellers just like yourself.Actually,the road had been out of the way before you knew it.Sometimes you would be afraid.A voice was speaking in your heart,"no more moving forward!"But you became timid when you saw others step as if nothing had happened.So you kept walking.Step by step,you got used to it,thinking that it was just what life was like. As for the reason why to start,you couldn't remember or didn't want to mention.Until someday you woke up from the dream,you started to thinking WHERE I AM AND WHY I'M HERE.

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The Travellers

You were walking along the road slowly and carefully.Every now and then, you looked around, and you found the travellers you were walking with were just like yourself. Before you knew it, the path you had taken with them would lead you to an unknown direction. Sometimes, you would be afraid. Then, a voice would speak in your heart,"Do not go any further!" But you became timid when you saw others continuing to walk the path. Ignoring the voice in your heart and following the crowd, you kept walking the path with them. As time passed,you got used to it, thinking that this must be what life should be. By this time, you chose not to remember, mention, nor talk about your initial purpose of your travel. Until one day, you woke up from the dream, and you started to question WHERE I AM AND WHY I'M HERE.

 

 

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The Travellers

You were walking along the road,slowly and carefully.Looking around now and then,you found the travellers just like yourself.Actually,the road had been out of the way before you knew it. (Note: This phrase is confusing. By "the road had been out of the way" Do you mean you reached the end of the road quickly? Did you take a wrong turn?)  Sometimes you would be were afraid.A voice was speaking in your heart,"no more moving forward!" But you became timid when you saw others step as if nothing had happened.So you kept walking.Step by step,you got used to it,thinking that it was just what life was like. As for the reason why to start,you couldn't remember or didn't want to mention. You could not remember why you started, or you did not want to mention the reasion. Until someday one day you woke up from the dream,you started to thinking WHERE I AM AND WHY I'M HERE. Where am I? And Why am I here?

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excuse me, what is it about? I don't think I can guess what you mean. But I usually ask myself the same questions? " where am I?, why I'm here and who am I?. Sometime, I seemed to lost my mind :( after asking myself that :(.
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Can you provide a Chinese translation? Thanks :)

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