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One week ago, my aunt, her husband, my parents, and their friends gathered at my house for a reunion. I've always been scared to entertain in my home whenever they come over to relax. My aunt loves singing, she has an extraordinary voice and so does my dad. He often sings four hours a day to satisfy his hobby. It was very noisy and it nearly forced any introvert like me go insane.

I made a decision move to the balcony, which was a seperate area that somewhat more quiet. I wanted to be alone. While I was concentrating on practicing English pronunciation, the screen of the laptop went black suddenly, no warning status, no signals. I was initially worried, thinking that there was something wrong with the program.   Fortunately I only had a wireless connection problem.   Nonetheless, it was not a serious problem like I had thought it was. I managed to solve it easily and obtained some knowledge about the computer. How sensational that evening was! 

Notes: I had forgotten to charge the computer after unplugging the cord.

Thanks for correcting my assignment!!!

An assignment from Coursera

One week ago, my aunt, and her husband, my parents, and their friends altogether gathered together at my house to join have a reunion party. I've been always always been scared to be present at home whenever they come and bring others along with a thought of relaxation hoping to relax. My aunt loves singing, and but she has an ordinary voice. Either So does my dad. He often spends [4 hours per 2 days]<--not sure what you mean here, it's not standard English to satisfy this hobby. There It was totally noisy and it nearly forced any introvert like me this introvert to go insane. Then I made a decision move to the balcony area, which was somewhat more separated and quieter, handled stuffs to do stuff on my own. While I was being concentrated concentrating on practicing English pronunciation, the screen of the laptop went black suddenly, with no warnings status, no attractive signals error messages. I was initially worried a lot. I thought: "There's would be something wrong in the systematic program system software for sure." After allAs it turned out, I unfortunately ran into a wireless connection trouble problem as I had predicted. Nonetheless, it was not such a serious problem that I had supposed it to be. I managed to solve it easily and obtained gained some computer knowledge about computer. How sensational that evening was!
Notes: I had forgotten to charge constantly by unplugging the adapter
Thanks for correcting my assignment!!!

Introverts of the world unite! I like quiet places too :)