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Distance within Modern Families Divorce and family breakdown are existing in modern families generally. However, this phenomenon is reflecting some changes among traditional society to modern society. In this essay, I intend to discuss the source of those problems as well as provide some solutions to them. In modern society, most families are double income family, in order to earn enough money to maintain life quality. Traditionally, male usually take the responsibility for family economy while female is the person who takes care of children. In this background, children are growing up under caring environment and both husband and wife are able to concentrate on single objective. Another contributing factor is now people’s self- awareness is stronger than those of last generation. Consequently, couples would not sacrifice own freedom or benefits to keep completion of a family if they had some arguments or frictions in lives. In order to solve the abovementioned problems, we should address the root cause of them. Firstly, I would say government could provide some financial incentive to parents if one of them chooses to take care of baby at home. Furthermore, the labor regulation should ask company to keep their current position if they restore the jobs in the limited period. Admittedly, the financial campaign can’t compensate for parents salary, but it still can encourage some parents who wish to accompany with their children. Regarding with second issue, we can’t take raising self-awareness as negative trend completely, since people of last generation bear heavy pressure from society and most women without economy independence; they would rather keeping family completion to pursing own happiness. What we can do is promote the importance of family and reminder people considering cautiously about getting marriage to prevent people from divorcing and creating unhappy family. In conclusion, I believe this phenomenon is constituted from different aspects; it is unable to solve them in short term. Nevertheless, adopting financial programme and promoting the importance of family and marriage might be the first step to them

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Distance within Modern Families

Divorce and family breakdown are existing in modern families generally. However, this phenomenon is reflectings some changes among from traditional society to modern society. In this essay, I intend to discuss the source of those problems as well as provide some solutions to them.

In modern society, most families are double income families, in order to earn enough money to maintain life a good quality of life, most families are double income families. Traditionally, males usually take the responsibility for the family economy while females is the person are the ones who takes care of the children. In this background situation, children are growing up under in a caring environment and both husband and wife are able to concentrate on a single objective. Another contributing factor is now how people’s self-awareness is stronger than those that of the last generation. Consequently, couples would do not sacrifice their own freedom or benefits to keep completion of a family together if they had some arguments or frictions tension in their lives.

In order to solve the abovementioned problems, we should address the root cause of them. Firstly, I would say government could should provide some financial incentive to parents if one of them chooses to take care of their baby at home. Furthermore, the labor regulations should ask require that companies to keep their current position available to them if they restore return to their the jobs in a specified the limited period. Admittedly, the such financial campaign incentives can’t completely compensate for a parent's salary, but it still can encourage help to support some parents who wish to accompany with personally mind their children. Regarding with the second issue, we can’t take raising self-awareness as a completely negative trend completely. Since people those of the last generation bear heavy pressure from society and most women are without economic independence, they would rather keeping their family completion together than to pursing pursue their own happiness. What we can do is promote the importance of the family and reminder people to considering think cautiously carefully about getting marriage married to prevent people from divorcing and creating unhappy families.

In conclusion, I believe this phenomenon is constituted from a result of different aspects; it is unable to solve them in the short term. Nevertheless, adopting a financial support programme and promoting the importance of the family and marriage might be the first step to solving them.

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