Holly is very interested in your position and insists that she is kept in mind. She always followed the interview feedback actively. When we told her she had passed the phone interview, she was glad to take the assessment. She has finished the first part of SI test yesterday. Unfortunately, her son became ill suddenly. We were sure she had to take care of her son, so that interrupted the assessment. Besides this situation, there was no other reason why she didn’t finish the test. She communicated with Jane to confirm whether she has the opportunity to finish the other parts. If you agree for her to take the rest of her test, we will reschedule it for her.

Not bad, just some changes to make it more fluent. :D