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Yesterday was such a bad day :( Yesterday, i had a lot of plans. First i was play tennis with my friend Carolina, but she got sick :( Of course, we couldn't play tennis. Later, my mom was cooking, and asked her: ''Dear mom, what are you cooking?'' she answered: PASTEL DE CHOCLO. Pastel de Choclo is the most famous food in Chile. It is mainly composed of corn. It is like a corn cake. The problem is that i don't like corn :( Then i couldn't have lunch. I got hungry the whole day. The part of the day that i waited with more exciting was the match of my favorite soccer team! UNIVERSIDAD DE CHILE. The problem was they loose 5-1 :( But that does not change my love for ''LA U'' because y love them every team, Indepently they lose or win. At night, my girlfriend broke up with me :( All was awful

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Yesterday was such a bad day :(

Yesterday, I had a lot of plans. First I was going to play tennis with my friend Carolina, but she got sick :( Of course, we couldn't play tennis. Later, my mom was cooking, and I asked her: ''Dear mom,

(Dear (name here), is what you put when you're writing a letter. If you're trying to use the term like Mom dear or mother dear it's in context of adding a cute name to someone) what are you cooking?'' she answered: PASTEL DE CHOCLO. Pastel de Choclo is the most famous food in Chile. It is mainly composed of corn. It is like a corn cake. The problem is that I don't like corn :( Then i couldn't have lunch. I got was hungry the whole day.

The part of the day that I waited with more exciting much excitement was the match of my favorite soccer team! UNIVERSIDAD DE CHILE. The problem was they loose lost 5-1 :( But that does not change my love for ''LA U'' because y I love them every team, Indepently time even if they lose or win. (you could say lose or win, but it sounds more correct to say (win or lose.) 

At night, my girlfriend broke up with me :(

All was awful

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