First notebook entry: Introducing myself

English is one of the most important subjects of my education.  I think it is useful and I also think it is difficult. I love English, but I'm shy when speaking English with others.  I don't know why, but I always believe that, "Nothing is impossible."  "Practice makes perfect." So i believe in myself.  I'm a winner.

I will speak more often in order to speak better English with my teacher and classmates.  Not only in class, but also out of class. I hope I will become good at English.  Step by step, I go on.

[You are very poetic.  Remember to capitalize "I" and "English."]

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

English is one of the most important subject in my study life,I think it is useful and I also think it is difficult. I love English,but I'm shy spoken English with all other.I don't know why.But I always believe "Nothing is impossible.""Practice makes perfect." So I believe myself,I'm winner.
I will speak more often I have'd better speak English with my teacther and my classmata to improve my English speaking.Not only in class but also out of class. I hope I will become good at in english step by step. Go on.