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Finding work in Spain Yesterday someone asked me if is true that Spain was hard to find employment. And it’s true, to find a job is very difficult. I had been without employment a year and my family had taken expired meal to feed ourselves. I have two friends that have children. One of them has lost his job and her husband is working but he’s not paid her. The other one had been living on streets until she found a job. In general, who had money, have now more money and they didn’t have, have less. (...I’m sorry, the next post I will write a entertaining text. I promise! :P)

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Finding work in Spain

Yesterday someone asked me if is true that it was hard to find employment in Spain. And it’s true, to find a job is very difficult. I had been without employment for a year and my family had taken expired meals to feed ourselves. (Is this past tense or still current? If currently, change "had" to "have".)

I have two friends that have children. One of them She has lost his her job and her husband is working, but he’s not paid supporting her. The other one had been living on streets until she found a job.

In general, those who had money before have now more money now, and they those who didn’t have money, now have less.

(...I’m sorry, in the next post I will write an entertaining text. I promise! :P)

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Finding work in Spain

Yesterday someone asked me if is true that Spain it was hard to find employment in Spain. And it’s true, to find a job is very difficult. I have been without employment for a year and my family has(or have, if you're learning British English) taken expired meal food to feed ourselves. (If you're still unemployed, you need to use the present perfect.)

I have two friends that have children. One of them has lost his her job and although her husband is working, but he’s not paid supporting her(Are they separated and he should be paying child support but isn't, or are they together and he's spending all his pay and not giving her any money?). The other one had been living on streets until she found a job.

In general, those who had money, have now have more money and those who didn’t have it, have less.

(...I’m sorry, the next post I will write a entertaining text. I promise! :P)

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