Corrections · 6
A History for exam
As soon as I woke up, I knew that it was going to be a special day. I wore got dressed and I ate breakfast quickly. I came later at arrived late to my university. I had a test at nine o'clock. I got a caught the bus, but I forget my money in my bedroom, however the bus driver said told me, "Don't worry, come on."
The bus came lowly was slow and I was nervous. My friend Paul sent me a text message. It said: "Come on! The exam is going to start in five minutes!". I could not do nothing anything.
The bus came arrived at the university. I ran to my class, but my class was closed. I was sad because I couldn't to do my exam, but in this at that moment my friend Paul came and he said, "The teacher hasn't come! We are going to celebrate."
It was a special day!
Good attempt, 3.
A History for exam
As soon as I woke up, I knew that it was going to be a special day. I wore got dressed and I had a breakfast quickly. I came arrived later at my university. I had a test at nine o'clock. I got a bus but I forget forgot my money in my bedroom but bus driver said to me: "Don't worry, come on".
The bus came lowly was slow and I was nervous. My friend Paul sent me a text message. It said: "Come on! The exam is going to start in five minutes!". I could not do nothing anything.
The bus came arrived at the university. I ran to my class. My class was closed. I was sad because I coundn't to do my exam, but in this moment my friend Paul came and he said: "The teacher hasn't come!. We are going to celebrate it".
It was a special day!
¡Qué suerte! La misma cosa pasó hoy para mí, pero tuve que entregar un ensayo. 3
A History for exam
As soon as I woke up, I knew that it was going to be a special day. I got dressed and I ate breakfast quickly. Later I showed up at my university. I had a test at nine o'clock. I got on a bus but I forget my money in my bedroom but bus driver said me: "Don't worry, come on".
The bus came slowly and I was nervous. My friend Paul sent me a text message. It said: "Come on! Exam is going to start in five minutes!". I could not do anything.
The bus pulled in at the university. I ran to my class, but the class door was closed. I was sad because I coundn't do my exam, but in just a moment later my friend Paul came and he said: "Teacher hasn't come!. We are going to celebrate it".
It was a special day!
(If you correct it, please, give me a number between 1-5 (1-bad. 5-excellent). Thank you!)
I give you a good solid 3 1/2 Good Job!!
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
