Corrections · 13
穷人是否应该投身慈善活动
这个题目是一个朋友推荐我写的。本来我觉得穷人不应该有参与慈善活动的责任。这是因为穷人已经面临很多困难。因为穷人支撑自己的家庭已经够困难了,
this clause has the same meaning with the sentence before it
因为穷人支撑自己的家庭已经够困难了,我原来觉得不穷的人没有权利来要求穷人投身慈善活动。反正, 穷人没有经济资源捐钱。而且我觉得投身慈善活动主要群体应该是富人。 但是我考虑这个题目之后,我回心转意改变主意了。
examples below are the situations that are suitable for the use of 回心转意
1. You broke up with your girlfriend. But after arriving home, you realized that the next day was Valentine's Day. As you would not like to spend the festival alone, you made a phone call to get your
girlfriend back. Then we say 你回心转意了。
2.A company gave you an offer, although this job would get you tons of money, it required you to work in the Antarctic. So, you turned it down. but after you were dumped by your girl friend, you changed your mind and decided to accept the offer. Then we say 你回心转意了。
So, you see, usually, when somebody else provide you with an essential option, you turn it down before you accept it ,then you say 回心转意
果虽然穷人不能捐钱,但是慈善活动并不限于捐钱。
果然as I thought If you use 果然 , you should mention what you have thought at the front of 果然
事实上很多慈善活动是捐时间的,比如说去养老院跟孤独,没有家人的老人聊天。这样的活动,穷人和富人能做得一样好。而且我觉得穷人能做一些慈善活动比富人做得更好。比如说,在伦敦最穷的区域很多年轻人是犯罪团伙的成员。当地居民团结起来缓解这个问题是最有效的方法。所以我觉得每一个社会阶层应该按他们自己的能力参与慈善活动。加以“穷”是一个相对概念。比如说,从一个非洲穷人的角度来说,大部分的英国“穷人”不算穷。所以在某种程度上,我们可以说每一个英国人应该参与帮助比英国穷的国家的慈善活动。
但是这篇作文的题目是“穷人是否应该投身慈善活动”。我觉得“投身”这个词有一点极端。参与慈善活动并不是一种义务,却是是一种选择。我个人觉得不管你的经济条件如何,大家都应该找机会帮助别人。但是富人会有更多和范围更广的参与慈善活动的机会。所以我还觉得投身慈善活动主要群体应该是富人。
总的来说,我们不能说穷人应该投身慈善活动,而且我们不能说富人应该投身慈善活动。但是我们可以说不管一个人的经济条件如何,这不否定他对社会的责任。
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