Emotions

One of my friend has cried all the time for 3 whole days.
I cannot tell you speak why she has cried. To keep the long story short, she is suffering from a great anger.
While I have been watching her, I realized that a man can be subject to their own emotions very easily.
In her case, no one has hit her or and made her do what she did not want.
It means people can be miserable enough by their emotions, not related to just something physical.

I usually regard emotions as a gift because all of the arts across the world stem from them.
Above all, we don't need to try hard if we don't have emotions.
Everyone tries to be happy. If happiness is gone, what is the absolute goal in our lives?

However, someone wants to oppose my opinion some people would disagree. In particular those who has been caught in the trap of their emotions like her.
When some events have a devastating impact on us, we need much time to be back heal/recover/pull ourselves back together.
Those occasions do not make allowances for us. They are like a storms and hurricanes.
We cannot be reasonable while whilst going through them.
Even the aftermath of them is considerable.

Why did God give us emotions?
Apart Except for happiness matters being happy, I believe there must be some other reasons.
I think it is due to our growth and spiritual achievement.
As the our lives get back their peace and clearer environment after a storm, we are also supposed to get back inner peace though it takes some time.
After the going through a hard (difficult sounds better) periods, we will not be fluctuated affected/perturbed by any occassions (occasion is more like weddings, birthdays, etc. use events instead) if they are not more severe.
Then, we can say with full confidence that we are capable of dealing with our emotions.
It is truly a matter of growth and change. It is attributed to the events which lead (present tense) us to lose control on ourselves.

Whenever I feel vulnerable to some bad cases, I think myself :
All of the failures and misfortunes never last long. They will be displaced to make way for new roads to change me for a long time.

Great writing, keep it up!

Correction, part 2/2

Why did God give us emotions?  Except for happiness matters, I believe there must be some reasons.

I think you may be trying to say this: Why did God give us emotions other than happiness?  I believe that there must be a reason.

I think it is due to our growth and spiritual achievement (I'm not completely sure what you're trying to say here ... maybe'spiritual development'?) 

As the lives get back their peace and clearer environment after a storm, we are also supposed to get back inner peace though it takes some time.

As we attempt to navigate the calm after the storm, we must also attempt to find our inner peace, although this may take time.

After enduring the hard period (such periods of difficulty), we will not be fluctuated stirred/perturbed by any ocassions if they are not more severe (other similar events - provided that they are not more severe).
Then, we can We can then confidently say with full confidencethat we are capable of dealing with (managing) our emotions.
It is truly growth and change, . It is attributed to the events which had led (caused) us to lose control on of ourselves (our self-control).

Whenever I feel vulnerable to some bad cases (during difficult times), I think to myself the following thought comes to mind (I changes "I think to myself" because you are fllowing the phrase with a colon) :
All of the failures and misfortunes never last long. They will be displaced to make way for new roads to change me for a long time.

Failure and misfortune does not last forever; they will pass and make way for new roads, which will have a lasting impact on me.

Okay, I'm finally done!  Sorry about the length - I hope that this all makes sense! 

This is a really good piece! You have some interesting thoughts and I agree with your take on failure and misfortune in that our failures and misfortunes can help to shape who we are and who we become. Hopefully your friend is okay and ready to move forward in her life. Anyway, as I mentioned before, good job! :)

Correction - part 1/2 (Sorry! I had to split my correction up into two parts!)

Emotions

One of my friends has cried all the time been crying non-stop for 3 (three - it's better to spell out numbers when writing) days.
I cannot speak say (reveal) why she has cried been crying. To long short make a long story short, she is suffering from great anger (is extremely angry).
While (I have been) watching her, I have realized (realised - but this is the British spelling, otherwise 'realized' is correct) that a man can very easily be subjected to blinded by their his own emotions very easily.
In her (my friend's) case, no one had hit her and nor had made her do what something (that) she did not want to do.
It This means (that) people (one) can be made miserable (enough) by their (one's) own emotions, (which are) not related unrelated to something physical (their actions / one's actions). 

I usually regard emotions as a gift because all of the arts across every art in the world stems (originates) from them.

Above all, we don't need to try hard if we don't have emotions.

I think you're trying to say: Above all, we don't need to force ourselves to do too much, as long as we have our emotions.

Everyone tries wants to be happy. If happiness is gone (Without happiness), what is the absolute (primary) goal in our lives (life)?

However, someone there are those who wants to oppose (disagree with) my opinion, in particular those who has have been caught in the trap of their own web of emotions, like her (such as my friend - just to make it absolutely clear that you're talking about your friend, since she hasn't been mentioned in a while).
Whenever some events have an event has a devastating impact on us, we need much time to be back recover.  Those Such occasions do not make allowances (exceptions) for us. (In that sense) They are like (can be comparable to) a storm and hurricane. storms and hurricanes.  We cannot (expect ourselves to) be reasonable (rational) while when going through (encountering) them.
Even in the aftermath (of them), their effects is are considerable.