Could anyone correct this for me ?

I'm rewriting my resumé/CV to send to a multinational company and I will be more than happy if anyone could correct my mistakes! Thanks in advance!

Professional Experience

Fancy Franks - Company Description, Location July-Oct 2013(In English months are proper nouns so require capitals)

Waitress

Internship programme - Company name (this should be separate because it is confusing to combine it with a menial service job, and because internships are usually unpaid) - Detail what specifically you did here, dates etc.

_________ Management Group Ltd¿? Location Is this really the name of the company? Because it sounds very vague : Sept 2012 - April 2013

Marketing Team Leader

Management of marketing employees, leading a team of 20 staff, developing and executing comprehensive research plans

P&B Visual Communications, Location: Feb-Sept 2012 (avoid using Portuguese, translate the company names instead where possible)

Commercial Assistant : Sales and operations, generating budgets, interacting with potential clients, improving sales efficiency, and processing alternative raw materials(¿?) I don't understand this - do you mean something like 'sourcing print communications materials'

Events - (Elaboration required)

This seems like a rough draft but looks generally quite good to me (but I'm no expert!). I think (as mentioned below) that you should put a 'Profile' section at the top, briefly summarising your experience and the role that you are seeking.

It would also be good to include any educational qualifications or voluntary work you have done.

If you have any colleagues (superiors) or professors that speak English, it would be good to include them as references.

Good Luck!

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