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After One Month
After a one month long winter vacation, my roomates and I finally get got together again. Strangely, I feel uncomfortable whenever I stay with them. However, I (do) feel lonely and miss them very much when I can't see them. As the saying goes, "We don't cherish what we have untill until they're it's gone." I don't cherish my presure (pressure? I'm not quite sure what you mean here) all (of) the time. On the New Year's Day of 2014 this year, we chattered happily on the phone and wished everyone of us (each other) good luck, just like four close sisters. And It seemed that as if we all forgot those had all forgotten all of the unhappy things which had happened before the term was over last term. After all these of this, I just want to say, "how kind life is!" Even though we made this or that kind of make mistakes sometimes, we can still have another chance to start a new biginning afresh. Atfer After one month, the time for me and my roomates and I to learn to live with each other better finally comes. has finally come.
Really good work! Nicely done :)
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