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short About me A little about me
About me. I was born in the Ukraine in the sity city Donetsk. In age When I was 4 years my parents and I fly to flew North in to the city of Norilsk and take me with him. As time passed, I grew. I now have my own family, my beloved wife and my children. I am learning the English language independently. I watch films with subtitles and reads book, but I don't no have any practice talking Englishlanguage. I'll I would be happy if someone people could help me with my poor English. Some words I translate because I don `t know what they mean and how to use them what it's say and write. Regards Max.
I don't disagree with the lady who corrected it earlier, but this would be my version:
A little about me
I was born in Donetsk, Ukraine. When I was 4, my parents flew north to Norilsk and took me with them. I grew there. Now, I have a family, my beloved wife and my children. I am learning English independently, watching films with subtitles, reading books, but have no practice in speaking the language. I'll be happy if some people help me with my poor English. Some words I have to translate and write, because I don`t know what they mean. Regards Max.
This is a more casual version. Anyway, nice effort. For future: удачи)
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