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I Like English
Before i don't like English.because of the exam.so i hate english.but now i like english very much.i hope I can speak English smoothly.
Correction and notes
I like English
First Pass - use I instead of i when talking about yourself. Also you are talking about the past so don't should be didn't.
And also "I hate" is the present, you are talking about the past - so "I hated"
And use a capital letter for a proper name - in this case English
Before I didn't like English.because of the exam.so I hated English.but now I like english very much.I hope I can speak English smoothly.
Second Pass - leave a space after a punctuation mark.
Before I didn't like English. because of the exam. so I hate english. but now I like english very much. I hope I can speak English smoothly.
Third Pass - what are the sentences. It is ambiguous.
Could it be
a) Before I didn't like English because of exams. So I hated English. But now I like English very much.
b) Before I didn't like English. Because of exams, I hated English.
a and b are basically two ways of saying the same things with only subtle differences.
Fourth Pass
I hope that I can speak English fluently.
I believe that fluently is the word that you want here. It conveys more than smoothly which gives a sense of rhythm rather than understanding and ability.
So my suggested correction ( with a slight addition to the final sentence).
Before I didn't like English because of exams. I hated English but now I like English very much. I hope that I will be able to speak English fluently.
I Like English
Before, I didn't really like English because of the exams. So I hated English. But now, I like English very much. I hope I can speak English fluently.
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