Drawing Eggs
More than four hundred years ago,There lived an italian named Vinic who was a well-known painter.His teacher asked him to draw eggs one after another at the beginning of his drawing class. He was tired of drawing eggs every day. One day,he asked his teacher,'sir, Is it easy for me to draw eggs every day ?','you are wrong,my little boy,it is obviously not an easy task! there are not same shapes of eggs in one thousand egg.No matter from which angle you look, you will find they are in different shapes. You are requested to draw eggs to improve your vision and improve your drawing skills so as to make you look accurately and draw proficiently!' hearing this,Vinci began focusing on drawing eggs.He drew lots of different shapes of eggs on pieces of water. later on,whatever he drew, he could them quickly and vividly
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Drawing Eggs
More than four hundred years ago, Tthere lived an italian named Vinic who was a well-known painter. His teacher asked him to draw eggs one after another at the beginning of his drawing class. He was tired of drawing eggs every day. One day,he asked his teacher, 'sir, Iis it easy for me to draw eggs every day?' 'Yyou are wrong, my little boy, it is obviously not an easy task! tThere are not same shapes of eggs in one thousand egg. [Maybe this sentence is better "In one thousand eggs, you will not find the same shape."] No matter from which angle you look, you will find they are in are differently shaped. You are requested to draw eggs to improve your vision and improve your drawing skills, so as to get you to look visualize accurately and draw proficiently!' hHearing this, Vinci began focusing on drawing eggs. He drew lots of differently shaped of eggs on pieces of water [do you mean paper?]. lLater on, whatever he drew, he could draw them quickly and vividly.
Nicely written - but watch your capitalization and punctuation. :)
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