The Key of Our Liberation Hello! I want to draw your attention! Please Respond "Each person moves according to his surrounding. No matter if you are a high skills person or not. People inclined to

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Mila Raido

The Key of Our Liberation Hello! I want to draw your attention! Please Respond "Each person moves according to his surrounding. No matter if you are a high skills person or not. People inclined to choose sex, TV programs, internet, alcohol, temporary relationship just to escape the unendurable sense of loneliness. It's a fleet life, not real and vague. What happen to the human raise? What happen to the human mind? Why they can't break the box? Sadly, society bring a huge pain to the individuals. Giving them a life without direction or direction without a life. This madness depends on our own blind obedience and ignorance. More often than not, you will be like a drone without mind and you just have a direction. If you want to make your own way, if you want to feel of your potential, if you want to find your purpose then you must choose SELF EDUCATE. It's your choice. Good Luck." philosopher http://www.italki.com/entry/406028

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The Key of Our Liberation

Hello!
I want to draw your attention!
Please Respond

I will try. :)

"Each person moves according to his surrounding whether or not you are a high skilled person. People incline to choose sex, TV programmes, internet, alcohol and temporary relationships just to escape from the unendurable sense of loneliness.
It's a fleet life, not real and vague. What happens to the human race?
What happens to the human mind? Why can't the people break the box?
Sadly, society brings a huge pain to the individuals while giving them a life without direction or a direction without life.
This madness depends on our own blind obedience and ignorance. More often than not, you will become a drone without mind and you will have only a direction (without mind) (--I'd say "without mind" here)
If you want to make your own way, if you want to feel your potential and if you want to find your purpose in life, then you must choose SELF EDUCATION/must educate yourself. It's your choice. Good Luck."
philosopher
http://www.italki.com/entry/406028

I am not a native, so I wouldn't rely on this correction.;)

I enjoyed your essay, Mila, keep up your good work! All the best!

I express my delight! Thank you, Mila Raido and Comandante

In all cases_if they correct it or not_ Thank you so much for your help :)

My friend! I think all the smart people will read and reflect

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