correct my mistakes please

In former time, many illiterate human had breakdowns because of a lack of information and the fact that this type person was not sure of him- or herself, so that the mental disorder illness rate was more than now. On this occasion, the Turkish ministry of health established regulations such as opening a new library and supporting all families in sending their children to school to bring up more informed children for a real future


If only I had had one child instead of two
My team can not win championship as long as we transfer the new forward
I will give you my car on the one condition that you gas it up
Supposing that I have 1 million dollars. Then I will buy a car for you
Even if I had money, I wouldn't give you a cent. 
By no means will I not go to her birthday party [I'm assuming you want to go.  If you don't want to go, it would be "By no means will I go to her birthday party."] 
He told me he was being attached [to what?]
I am generally hungry.

Could you return the car before its time
How pretty she is. She has long beautiful hair
What a wonderful day. There is not any cloud in the sky

He always gets aggressive when he does not smoke. That’s why I am always telling him to have medical treatment for smoking withdrawal.

My co-workers always irritate me. He thinks he is very funny. Unlike he is not[?]

I have to pay my electric bills -  otherwise they will cut off my electricity.
I don’t feel very well. Nevertheless, I will go to school tomorrow
I bough some supplements in order to loose weight.