How lucky we are
Two days ago, one building collapsed on evening.
Unfortunately, there were a lot of students who stayed there for the freshmen orientation .
More than 100 students were crashed, about 20 students of them got injured seriously.
Above all, it was 10 deceased students that render us feel very sorry and scary.
Of the 10 victims, there was a brave but unfortunate man.
Right after the building collapsed first, he survived and escaped from there.
However, he jumped into there to save other students.
The building collapsed again thereafter, he finally left for the heaven.
I usually believe that everything does not just happen. There must be at least one reason.
In this case, however, I cannot think that way.
Why was he supposed to leave here so early?
He should have lived for a long time.
If he had lived longer, he would have done good for many people in the world.
I hope his sacrifice would come to people's mind whenever we regard the world as very cruel and cold.
There is always countless uncertainty about the accidents we might go through.
We cannot avoid or skip some of them.
It means that there is nothing strange even if I come to die right tomorrow.
We must have passed by many dangerous occasions even while we were not conscious of them.
Anyway, I am still alive and breathing fresh air on the Earth.
I might have forgotten a will to live and a desire to make advancement on all my predecessors.
Tomorrow must be better than today.
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How lucky we are
Two days ago in the evening, a building collapsed. Unfortunately, there were a lot of students who there for the freshmen orientation.
More than 100 students were crushed, 20 students of them were seriously injured.
But the worst was that 10 students died, leaving us very sorry and scared.
Of the 10 victims, there was one brave, but unfortunate, man.
Right after the building first collapsed, he escaped and survived
However, he jumped right back in there to save other students.
The building collapsed further and he died as well.
I usually believe that everything does not just happen. There must be at least one reason.
In this case, however, I cannot believe that.
Why was he supposed to leave earth so early?
He should have lived for a long time.
If he had lived longer, he would have done good things for many people in the world.
I hope peopel will remember his sacrifice peopel think of the world as very cruel and cold.
It is never certain when an accident will happen to us.
We cannot avoid them. No one would think anything of it if I died tomorrow. There must have been many dangerous occasions that were in and were not aware.
Anyways, I am still alive and breathing fresh air on the Earth.
I might have lost the will to and the desire to improve on the legacy of my predecessors.
Tomorrow must be better than today.
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Is it the truth ? Did that building really collapse ? Where did it happen ?
Well, the story you've told is very sad. The sequence of black events sometimes seems to be more cruel than the plot of a book.
Only few years ago, in the Italian town called l'Aquila, a powerful and terrifying earthquake made a university hostel fall down. In another period It wouldn't have been a disaster but in that day many young students were there studying for the next exams and they died.
You are quite deep in your thoughts. There is who think that everything about our lives is already written. Others say that we can build our future brick by brick while aging. You say we are lucky, and we are! In my opinion one of the best thing we get at the birth is we don't know how long the life will be. Without limit we think we have time to do everything and in line with the western thinking, it is fuel.
Bye and good luck !
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How lucky we are
Two days ago, one building collapsed in the evening.
Unfortunately, there were a lot of students who stayed there for the freshmen orientation .
More than 100 students were crashed, about 20 students of them got injured seriously.
Above all, it was 10 deceased students that rendered us feel very sorry and scary.
Of the 10 victims, there was a brave but unfortunate man.
Right after the building collapsed first, he survived and escaped from there.
However, he jumped into there to save other students.
The building collapsed again thereafter, he died
I usually believe that everything does not just happen. There must be at least one reason.
In this case, however, I cannot think that way.
Why was he supposed to die so early?
He should have lived for a long time.
If he had lived longer, he would have done good for many people in the world.
I hope his sacrifice would come to people's mind whenever we regard the world as very cruel and cold.
There is always countless uncertainty about the accidents we might go through.
We cannot avoid or skip some of them.
It means that there is nothing strange even if I come to die right tomorrow.
We must have passed by many dangerous occasions even while we were not conscious of them.
Anyway, I am still alive and breathe fresh air on the Earth.
I might have forgotten a will to live and a desire to make advancement on all my predecessors.
Tomorrow must be better than today.
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R.I.P
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R.I.P.
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