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Asamichan89's notebook entry: Nov 20, 2010 这些天,我感到非常疲倦。只要保持每天学习,在夜班工作。这是我唯一能做的吗?平平淡淡。

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Asamichan89's notebook entry: Nov 20, 2010

这些天,我感到非常疲倦。只要保持每天学习,在夜班工作。这是我唯一能做的吗?平平淡淡。
 


这些天,我感到非常疲倦。白天坚持学习,深夜上班工作。(难道)这是我唯一能做的吗? 平平淡淡。
I think that is closed to what you want to show
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Asamichan89's notebook entry: Nov 20, 2010

这些天,我感到非常疲倦。只要保持每天学习,在夜班工作。这是我唯一能做的吗?平平淡淡。
 
i think your Chinese is good !come on
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Asamichan89's notebook entry: Nov 20, 2010

这几天,我感到非常疲倦。只能保持每天学习,然后在夜班工作。这是我唯一能做的吗?平平淡淡。


保持 you  can  use  it  or  not  , i  think  not  use  is better  ,
然后 you  also  can  use  it  or  not  ,    it  have  connect    of   role  ,
这是我唯一能做的吗?  in  fact  i  am  not  clearly  understand  you  what  is  you  want  to  say  ,
平平淡淡  you  are  good  , you  can  read  idioms  .
In general ,  you are  good  ,  haven't  big  wrong ,  
fiting !
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Asamichan89's notebook entry: Nov 20, 2010

这些天,我感到非常疲倦。只要保持每天学习,再夜班工作。这是我唯一能做的吗?平平淡淡。
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Yeeep~ Do you mind showing me where specifically I made a mistake and posting it as a corrected entry then? Seems to me there are quite a lot of mistakes~~ Thankyou~~ I'd really appreciate it~~

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