第八天

我的朋友的狗名叫Ky，它的背是黑色的。它是只小狗还有它很喜欢吃胡萝卜，它还没有学习吃狗粮。因为它是只小狗所以很好奇它。我的朋友真爱它。 “真的很爱它” 更好 better
她对我说：“这是我的新小狗，它很卡哇伊！
我说：“它真的很卡哇伊！你什么时候买它的？“
她说：”我没有买它，它给了我。“ 别人把它送给我的
我说：”谁给了它我呢？“
她说：“我妈妈把它给了我，她很好看。“ 她对我很好

My friend's dog is named Ky, he is a german shepherd. He is a puppy and he really likes to eat carrots，he hasn't learned to eat dogfood yet. Because he is a puppy, he is very curious. My friend really loves him. My friend said to me: "This is my new puppy, he is very cute!" I said: "He really is cute! When did you buy him?" She said: "I didn't buy him, he was given to me." I said: "Who gave him to you?" She said: "My mom gave him to me， she is very nice.


I'm sure there are going to be a pretty large amount of errors in this one, oh well

It's so good, but you should pay more attention in "word"

(can I speak Chinese?)你的标点符号也用错了呢，应该这个格式 “” 我知道你是不小心的哈哈，形容词、动词、名词这些应该区分开来，像“他很好看”在我们中国的意思是“She is so pretty”, “还有” “和” 两者意思是不一样的，但相似，一般情况下可互换，需要根据具体情况来判断。希望你做得更好，加油！ :)

第八天

我的朋友的狗的名字叫Ky，它是黑背。它是小狗   它是一条黑背的小狗，和它很喜欢吃胡萝卜，它还没有学习吃狗粮。因为它是小狗它很好奇 它很小，所以对周围一切很好奇。我的朋友真的很爱它。
她对我说：“这是我的新小狗，它很卡哇伊！
我说：“它真很卡哇伊！你什么时候买它的？“
她说：”我没有买它，它是别人给了我的。“
我说：”谁给了它我把它给你的？“
她说：“我妈妈给了他我的，她它很好看。“

My friend's dog is named Ky, he is a german shepherd. He is a puppy and he really likes to eat carrots，he hasn't learned to eat dogfood yet. Because he is a puppy, he is very curious. My friend really loves him. My friend said to me: "This is my new puppy, he is very cute!" I said: "He really is cute! When did you buy him?" She said: "I didn't buy him, he was given to me." I said: "Who gave him to you?" She said: "My mom gave him to me， she is very nice.


I'm sure there are going to be a pretty large amount of errors in this one, oh well.

第八天

我的朋友的狗名叫Ky，它是黑背。它是小狗和它很喜欢吃胡萝卜，它还没有学习吃狗粮。因为它是小狗它很好奇(它对周围的事情充满了好奇)。我的朋友真（的很）爱它。
她我说：“这是我的新小狗，它很卡哇伊！
我说：“它真很卡哇伊（真的）！你什么时候买它？“
她说：”我没有买它，它给了我。“
我说：”谁给了它我（是谁把他给了你）？“
她说：“我妈妈给了他我（它的妈妈把它给了我），她很好看。“

My friend's dog is named Ky, he is a german shepherd. He is a puppy and he really likes to eat carrots，he hasn't learned to eat dogfood yet. Because he is a puppy, he is very curious. My friend really loves him. My friend said to me: "This is my new puppy, he is very cute!" I said: "He really is cute! When did you buy him?" She said: "I didn't buy him, he was given to me." I said: "Who gave him to you?" She said: "My mom gave him to me， she is very nice.


It's pretty good,but you need notice some small details,for example the receptitive statement.

第八天

我的朋友的狗名叫Ky，它是黑背。它是小狗和它很喜欢吃胡萝卜，它还没有学习吃狗粮。因为它是小狗所以它很好奇。我的朋友真的爱它。
她对我说：“这是我的新小狗，它很卡哇伊！
我说：“它真的很卡哇伊！你什么时候买的它？“
她说：”我没有买它，是别人给我的它给了我。“
我说：”谁给你的了它我？“
她说：“我妈妈给了他我的，她很好看。“

My friend's dog is named Ky, he is a german shepherd. He is a puppy and he really likes to eat carrots，he hasn't learned to eat dogfood yet. Because he is a puppy, he is very curious. My friend really loves him. My friend said to me: "This is my new puppy, he is very cute!" I said: "He really is cute! When did you buy him?" She said: "I didn't buy him, he was given to me." I said: "Who gave him to you?" She said: "My mom gave him to me， she is very nice.


I'm sure there are going to be a pretty large amount of errors in this one, oh well.

第八天

我朋友的狗名叫Ky，它是黑背。它是小狗但它很喜欢吃胡萝卜，它还没有学习吃狗粮。因为它是小狗它很好奇。我的朋友真的爱它。
她对我说：“这是我的新小狗，它很卡哇伊！
我说：“它真的很卡哇伊！你什么时候买的它？“
她说：”这个小狗不是我买的，是别人给我的。“
我说：”谁把它给了你？“
她说：“我妈妈给把它给了我，妈妈对我真的很好。“

My friend's dog is named Ky, he is a german shepherd. He is a puppy and he really likes to eat carrots，he hasn't learned to eat dogfood yet. Because he is a puppy, he is very curious. My friend really loves him. My friend said to me: "This is my new puppy, he is very cute!" I said: "He really is cute! When did you buy him?" She said: "I didn't buy him, he was given to me." I said: "Who gave him to you?" She said: "My mom gave him to me， she is very nice.


I'm sure there are going to be a pretty large amount of errors in this one, oh well.