Family

Hi, today I will write about my family. I have two sisters and a brother. I am 24, my sisters are 21 and 19 and my brother is 15. So I am the eldest of the siblings. For France we are a large family. My parents divorced 8 years ago and we have lived with our mother but we have always been able to see our father when we wanted.

My grandparents came from Algeria in the 50's, my father was born in France and my siblings and me too. We are the so-called "second generation". We are all students because we all think it's very important for our future, particularly for immigrant's children of immigrants and for women!
So I study Chemistry, my sisters study management and my brother is still in high school. I hope he will go to university, but I'm a little afraid [maybe "nervous" or "worried" is better] because he is very lazy!

Family

Hi, today I will write about my family. I have two sisters and a brother. I am 24, my sisters are 21 and 19 and my brother is 15. So I am the eldest of the siblings. For France, we are a large family. My parents divorced 8 eight* years ago and we have lived with our mother, but we have always been able to see our father when we wanted.

My grandparents came from Algeria in the 50's, my father was born in France and my siblings and me I were too. We are the so-called "second generation". We are all students because we all think (that) it's very important for our future, particularly for an immigrant's children [=the children of immigrants] and for women!

So I study [=am studying] Chemistry, my sisters study management, and my brother is still in high school. I hope he will go to university, but I'm a little afraid [=nervous, apprehensive, trepidatious, concerned, worried] because he is very lazy!

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*In English, we write out numbers up to ten. From 11 on, we can leave it numerical.

Family

Hi, today I will write about my family. I have two sisters and a brother. I am 24, my sisters are 21 and 19 and my brother is 15. So I am the eldest of the sibling. For France we are a large family. My parents divorced 8 years ago and we have lived with our mother but we have always been able to see our father when we wanted.

My grandparents came from Algeria in the 50's, my father was born in France and sibling and me too. We are the so-called "second generation". We are all students because we all think it's very important for our future particularly for immigrant's children and for women!
So I study Chemistry, my sisters study management and my brother is still in high school. I hope he will go to university, I'm a little afraid because he is very lazy!