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Nowadays Young People Always Spend Too Much Time on Playing Cell Phone Nowadays young people always spend too much time on playing cell phone, when they are walking on the road, riding on the bus, studying in the class, they are always playing everywhere. They have no time to read book, no time to accompany their parents, no time to talk with their wife or husband,no time to enjoy the scenery, they are very busy, because playing phone. Taking a lot of time to play cell phone cause some disease, e.g.cervical spondylopathy, nearsightedness. it is not healthy.We should get good habits. (Thank you for correcting, if you need help, I'll be there for you! O(∩_∩)O谢谢)

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Nowadays Young People Always Spend Too Much Time on Playing on their Cell Phone

Nowadays young people always spend too much time on playing on their cell phone.  When they are walking on the road, riding on the bus, studying in the class, they are always playing everywhere.
They have no time to read books, no time to see accompany their parents, no time to talk with their wife or husband, no time to enjoy the scenery; they are very busy, however, because they are playing on their phone.
Spending Taking a lot of time to playing on cell phones could cause some diseases [maybe it's better to say "poses health risks"], e.g.cervical spondylopathy, or nearsightedness. it is not healthy.  We should practice healthy get good habits.

(Thank you for correcting, if you need help, I'll be there for you! O(∩_∩)O谢谢)

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