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S.Valentine Day's Hello! Today I would tell you my S.Valentine Day's! :) A few days before S.Valentine Day's, I thought about what I could give to my boyfriend. I didn't want to buy a present, it would have been expected and I wanted give him something that would show my love for him! So I decided to prepare some special biscuits: this because I love to bake sweets. Friday morning I got up early because I had to prepare a surprise to my boyfriend: I was very excited!!! :) I was sure to my success!! I prepared the pastry with one egg, 100 grams of sugar, 250 grams of flour, 80 grams of oil, one teaspoon of yeast and one bag of vanillin! It's easy!! I had let it stand the dough in the fridge for 30 minutes then I stretched it and I obtained many little hearts! I cooked the biscuits in the owen to 190 degree for 12 minutes. The biscuits was ready but I wanted to make it special so I decorated them with royal icing pink and white! The photo below shows how the biscuits were! In the evening I put the sweets in a box and I have wrapped it with wrapping paper! I was very satisfied!! :D I wrote him a letter and when I give him the present I told him that he would have to open it when he got home. All the evening he was curious and he thought what I could give him! When he arrived at home he ruined my surprise because first he opened the gift and then the letter! This is called curiosity!! :) But it was really happy and he told me that it was the best gift he had ever received! :) I love him!

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St.Valentine Day's

Hello! Today I would like to tell you about my St.Valentine Day! :)

A few days before St.Valentine Day, I thought about what I could give to my boyfriend. I didn't want to buy a present, it would have been expected and I wanted give him something that would show my love for him! So I decided to prepare some special cookies: this because I love to bake sweets.

Friday morning I got up early because I had to prepare a surprise for my boyfriend: I was very excited!!! :) I was sure I would be successful!!
I prepared the pastry with one egg, 100 grams of sugar, 250 grams of flour, 80 grams of oil, one teaspoon of yeast and one bag of vanilla! It's easy!!
I had let the dough stand  in the fridge for 30 minutes then I stretched it and I made many little hearts! I baked the cookies in the oven at 190 degrees for 12 minutes.
The cookies were ready but I wanted to make it special so I decorated them with pink and white royal icing! The photo below shows how the biscuits looked!

In the evening I put the sweets in a box and I  wrapped it with wrapping paper!
I was very satisfied!! :D
I wrote him a letter and when I gave him the present I told him that he would have to open it when he got home. All  evening he was curious and he thought about what I could give him! When he arrived at home he ruined my surprise because first he opened the gift and then the letter! This is called curiosity!! :) But he was really happy and he told me that it was the best gift he had ever received! :)

I love him!

 

i think what you made we call "cookies", not biscuits. You can say "cook a cookie" but that is very odd. We usually say "make cookies" or "bake cookies".

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S.Valentine Day's

Hello! Today I would tell you my S.Valentine Day's! :)

A few days before S.Valentine Day's, I thought about what I could give to my boyfriend. I didn't want to buy a present, it would have been expected and I wanted give him something that would show my love for him! So I decided to prepare some special biscuits cookies: this because I love to bake sweets.

Friday morning I got up early because I had to prepare a surprise to my boyfriend: I was very excited!!! :) I was sure to of my success!!
I prepared the pastry with one egg, 100 grams of sugar, 250 grams of flour, 80 grams of oil, one teaspoon of yeast and one bag of vanillin vanilla! It's easy!!
I had let it stand the dough stand in the fridge for 30 minutes then I stretched rolled it and I obtained cut out many little hearts! I cooked baked the biscuits cookines in the owen to at 190 degree for 12 minutes.
The biscuits was cookies were ready but I wanted to make it special so I decorated them with royal-pink and white icing! The photo below shows how the biscuits were cookies turned out.   

In the evening I put the sweets in a box and I have wrapped it with wrapping paper!
I was very satisfied!! :D
I wrote him a letter and when I give gave him the present I told him that he would have to open it when he got home. All the evening he was curious and he thought what I could give had given him! When he arrived at home he ruined my surprise because first he opened the gift and then the letter! This is called curiosity!! :) But it he was really happy and he told me that it was the best gift he had ever received! :)

I love him!

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They look yummy! Awesome!
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Wow, very nice present and to idea! :)
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Thank you :D

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