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In adulthood, it is quite youngsters to get are influenced by their friends

Nowadays, raising a child is getting more difficult than in the past. Most of the families try to find out several ways to raise wonderful children. Today, certainly the younger generation be is impressed by their friends because young people spend more time with their friends in school or and other places.
This influence could be negative or positive, but it's certain inevitable. For example, when I was in high school, That time Tomas and me I were very close friends. We used to like each other very much and we did everything together, even if I had problems such as money, girlfriends and so forth. One day I saw him while he was smoking a cigarette, and I was shocked. because I had never has not seen him when he smoke before.  after that He gave me once a cigarette and told me you should to try it, but I could did not want to try it.  because I was thinking thought this it is was a horrible idea, and if my family knew they may get angry to with me. but Nevertheless, I smoked it, because Tomas was the one of my best friends. and I did not heart his heart that’s why I smoked. Finally I have been smoking since. when tomas gave me once
To sum up, young people get are very easily influenced from other people or and their friends; therefore, the family should meet their children's friends and pursue ask them what they are doing and where they are going with whom.

Good effort.  Keep practicing!