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A Beautiful Coastal City of China---QingDao (with pictures) The next few days, I will introduce some pretty cities of China, the first one is QingDao where is one of my italki friend named LoyFr's favourite cities, as LoyFr like sea. BaDaGuan is the most beautiful place of Qingdao, not only there is near by the sea, but also so many historic buildings, these ancient buildings are part of the national heritage. Some old buildings tell us cruel stories, for example, there is a prison which was used by Japanese to abuse chinese people while the Second World War, when you go there, you will truly find how cruel they were! If you like sea food, QingDao is a good choose to taste so many kinds of delicious food. HuangDao, there is the best sandbeach of QingDao. That"HuangDao" translate into English is “yellow island”, because the sand in this place is very yellow ,just like gold. The sky is bule, the sea is bule, the sand is golden, all of them connect together, it's gorgeous. If you are free, please come to my country, come to QingDao O(∩_∩)O哈哈~ (Thank you for correcting, if you need help, I'll be there for you! O(∩_∩)O谢谢)

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A Beautiful Coastal City of in China---QingDao (with pictures)

Over the next few days, I will introduce some pretty cities of China,. tThe first one is QingDao, a favorite city of where is one of my italki friends, named LoyFr's favourite cities, because as LoyFr likes the sea.
BaDaGuan is the most beautiful place of  in Qingdao, not only because there is near it is by the sea, but also for its so many historic buildings,. tThese ancient buildings are part of the Chinese national heritage. However, Ssome old buildings also tell us cruel stories,. fFor example, there is a prison which was used by the Japanese to abuse chinese people while during the Second World War,. wWhen you go there, you will truly find how cruel they truly were!
If you like sea food seafood, QingDao is a good choose choice to taste so many kinds of delicious food.
At HuangDao, there is the best sandbeach of in QingDao. That"HuangDao" translates into English is as “yellow island”,. This is because the sand in this place there is very yellow, just like gold. The sky is bule blue, the sea is bule blue, the sand is golden, and all of them these elements connect together, to produce a it's gorgeous landscape.
If you are free can, please come to visit my country, and come to QingDao O(∩_∩)O哈哈~
(Thank you for correcting, if you need help, I'll be there for you! O(∩_∩)O谢谢)

 

This is a very good piece of writing! You use very descriptive language and the images you've included help add to the visual appeal of the notebook entry. I feel like you are a very artistic person, I am correct?

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Though I have not to there, but I know Qingdao is a beautiful city, sky is blue and sea. isn't it? Welcome to Shanghai.

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